Lori, this is an outstanding inspiring composition! If only more people would take the time to share in the simple things in life. Well-done. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.
If we would only take the time to notice their smiles and frowns too.
We live in a cold cruel society..one only we can change.
You brought a tear with this one Lori. Which is the only proof I still live.
Thank You.
This poem touched me to the core of my heart. You wrote it in a beautiful way. We are supposed to give. We are created to give. Thanks for sharing this.
Janet
Powerful wrap up stanza, leaving with a smile as if a life long friend had been found. . . and you did just that. Whether truth or fictional write, this is such a humanitarian feat of charity in words.
"Sitting alone, a
single tear acknowledged
its victory, slowly surveying
the homeless look
on my face." <---so much said in this stanza, great expression
You gave him so much more than you'll probably ever realize. Your loving spirit shines in this piece, Lori. An excellent piece. Thank you.
Lori, Thank you for bringing this
subject to light. Excellent poem!
I believe we should all talk and
share a meal with the homeless at
least once a month!(my opinion)
Take care.
Love,
Becca of Faith
This one is a gem. We never know how far a little bit of kindness shown to another can go. The gift of giving is far more than the gift of receiving. I'm so happy that you had made this homeless man smile. You are a sweet soul. Wonderful write indeed!
This is beautifully written. It truly reveals a level of emotion experienced only through selfless giving. This goes with my top favorites. Caring..Sharing..Giving
Your loving heart shines like a beacon in this moving poem Lori...
One kind act given freely can transform a person's life for the better
in so many ways...
Peter
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If love, hath lost its beat.
..indeed..I sometimes wonder WHO is the homeless one..
beautiful Lori..you have a grand heart...:)
Vesna :)
This is just outstanding Lori!!
love Tinka
We live in a cold cruel society..one only we can change.
You brought a tear with this one Lori. Which is the only proof I still live.
Thank You.
Lisa
Pure Gold...
Carmen :-)
Janet
"The Trade" is a mirror showing the face of a wise soul.
Thank You for sharing life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Congrats Sis Lori,
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
single tear acknowledged
its victory, slowly surveying
the homeless look
on my face." <---so much said in this stanza, great expression
You gave him so much more than you'll probably ever realize. Your loving spirit shines in this piece, Lori. An excellent piece. Thank you.
subject to light. Excellent poem!
I believe we should all talk and
share a meal with the homeless at
least once a month!(my opinion)
Take care.
Love,
Becca of Faith
This one is a gem. We never know how far a little bit of kindness shown to another can go. The gift of giving is far more than the gift of receiving. I'm so happy that you had made this homeless man smile. You are a sweet soul. Wonderful write indeed!
Sandie May Angel :o)
So touching, isn't it incredible that such a small gesture could be so powerful. Great write Lori, thanks for sharing.
Warm hugs
Elga
EDL
Reindeer
A heartfelt piece
did'nt that feel great?
William......Peace
One kind act given freely can transform a person's life for the better
in so many ways...
Peter
With a million dollar ending!
an excellent, haunting write--very powerfully conveyed!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)