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The Trade
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Lunch in the park...


I traded
my sandwich
and cake
for a homeless man’s smile,
in the park
where ducks eat free.

As we talked,
I offered my grapes and
a Hamilton.

“No thank you,” He Said.
“You have already been too kind.”

Tears challenged
my eyes.

“Too kind,” I thought.

Sitting alone, a
single tear acknowledged
its victory, slowly surveying
the homeless look
on my face.

As he walked with the ducks,
I left with the homeless man’s
smile.

 

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 Reviews of "The Trade"
Reviewed on October 13, 2004
I leave with yours and will continue to wear it. Very nice expression of humanity. l&p G

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
How shall I ever love again?
If love, hath lost its beat.

..indeed..I sometimes wonder WHO is the homeless one..

beautiful Lori..you have a grand heart...:)

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
Yes me crying too now!!

This is just outstanding Lori!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
This one made me cry, this is beautiful Lori.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
Lori, this is an outstanding inspiring composition! If only more people would take the time to share in the simple things in life. Well-done. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
If we would only take the time to notice their smiles and frowns too.
We live in a cold cruel society..one only we can change.
You brought a tear with this one Lori. Which is the only proof I still live.
Thank You.

Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
Cool write

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
Are you going to give it back?

Pure Gold...

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Powerful ending! Lori, this touched my heart. Traded the lunch for the man's smile. Priceless.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
This poem touched me to the core of my heart. You wrote it in a beautiful way. We are supposed to give. We are created to give. Thanks for sharing this.
Janet

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
This is a picture that talks made of words that depict life.

"The Trade" is a mirror showing the face of a wise soul.

Thank You for sharing life.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Powerful wrap up stanza, leaving with a smile as if a life long friend had been found. . . and you did just that. Whether truth or fictional write, this is such a humanitarian feat of charity in words.

Congrats Sis Lori,
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
"Sitting alone, a
single tear acknowledged
its victory, slowly surveying
the homeless look
on my face." <---so much said in this stanza, great expression

You gave him so much more than you'll probably ever realize. Your loving spirit shines in this piece, Lori. An excellent piece. Thank you.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Lori, Thank you for bringing this
subject to light. Excellent poem!
I believe we should all talk and
share a meal with the homeless at
least once a month!(my opinion)
Take care.
Love,
Becca of Faith

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Lori:

This one is a gem. We never know how far a little bit of kindness shown to another can go. The gift of giving is far more than the gift of receiving. I'm so happy that you had made this homeless man smile. You are a sweet soul. Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Dear Lori,

So touching, isn't it incredible that such a small gesture could be so powerful. Great write Lori, thanks for sharing.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
This is beautifully written. It truly reveals a level of emotion experienced only through selfless giving. This goes with my top favorites. Caring..Sharing..Giving

EDL

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Beautiful and excellent, this touched my heart, wonderful poem to read today!

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
What an inspirational write. Beautiful

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Bravo! excellent write
A heartfelt piece
did'nt that feel great?

William......Peace

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Darn. I'd be smiling too if you'd give me you lunch. Especially that cake. Chocolate, was it? Nothing wrong with sharing with our fellow man.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Your loving heart shines like a beacon in this moving poem Lori...
One kind act given freely can transform a person's life for the better
in so many ways...
Peter

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
He gave the narrator something very special!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Lori this deserves an award! Such a poignant deeply moving poem!
With a million dollar ending!

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
(((lori)))

an excellent, haunting write--very powerfully conveyed!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
very inspiring....


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