Simplicity (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 4, 2004

Soothing and relaxing poem, Lori. I liked the emptied my mind of yesterday part. Nice!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

The simple things in life can be the most wonderful things, I adore the Simplicity of your words. Excellent.
Reg.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Beautifully expressed!

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

"I emptied my mind of yesterday"....Amen...Peace Abel

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

I'm wondering which raindrop won the race.

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

nice. really portrays the moment of letting it all go. liked the bird image. and the rain.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Simply FANTASTIC~`*

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Beautiful Lori!
Absolutely Splendid!
Becca

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Yes. And the beat goes on, and the beat goes on.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Very good. I feel that's the secret to
happiness in this life.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Lori,

Unique & profound - exceptionally composed!!

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Simple things are often the best soothers. I love watching raindrops race across my window. Well Done, Lori.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Simply and beautifully said.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Lori, your words offer relaxation of the heart, mind and soul. A commodity not found often enough.
Enjoyed.

Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Beats caffine

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

yes Lori, there's quite a bit of joy in little things. Great poem. l&p G

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Appreciate the reminder of the peace in nature's rain. Every day is a good day, even if we tend to complain. At least we're alive to complain.

blessin's Lori,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Elegant and quite beautiful. Such moments of reprieve fortify.

Gina

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Your words encourage solitude and peace within. Very nice, Lori.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Gentle soft relaxing piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Lori, i did this today and it was heaven. you described it so well here. excellent poem!

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

simplicity but difficult to achieve - wonderfully & fatally executed
i was sent hasta y hacia robin

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Fantastic line...I emptied my mind of yesterday
Always enjoy your words.....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

That is some sweet write, Lori. I should do that more often then I would not be in the trouble I am in. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

We all need these moments. Your poetry captures it well.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Clearing the mind is often hard to do. Maybe the grace within these lines can help others achieve what often seems impossible. Well Done

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Sounds like meditation to me, and a damn good ability you have there...Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

in the most simple of events we can feel the essence of the universe ... poetic splendor here ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Gentle and reflective..Lori
Peter

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

lori, we need those moments to refuel...you described it exactly

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Lovely. Truly lovely.

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Wise words from such a youthful poet! Life is is not a series of tasks...the task is to live well...and seeing the simple pleasures alloted to us may be the most important part of that. All good things to you, M'Lady.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Exquisite poem and this line is stellar

I emptied my mind of yesterday
and let the beauty of the moment grace my life

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh But,IF All Could Only LEARN The SIMPLE?

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

What an absolutely remarkable way to express events that most people would never see. Thank you, Lori for brightening my days with your words.
Janet

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

YOu recount that splendor with such beauty Lori!
This is another of your exquisite gems!

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

After reading this a few times, I feel more de-compressed myself. Thank you.

EDL

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

(((lori)))

it's the simplest things that bring us special blessings--like breathing and vision--and the ability to just let go of the frustrations and begin anew

i think my review is longer than this beautifully penned piece--thank you for blessing me with your words today--truly enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)