Who cares what they say Lori anyway...
You get to the heart of the matter
" The Blind leading the Blind "
Love your sardonic and acerbic wit
Love
Peter
Perhaps 'they' try too hard to glorify their mediocrity. Great write Lori.
EDL
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
LOL. sad sad sad thing is..is some really believe those pics one sees the human race evolving from monkies, if that were so how come there are no throw backs, or half evolved half n half.. yup let em say..
though not sure what my ex was\is..
clever quicky here, and from a laywer..huh..lol or lawyer even...
Lori,
I know a few that may have actually evolved from something..not sure what it was..and into what is even a bigger mystery.
I like the way you twist this...leaving the reader to examine their own thoughts on the matter.
Great job!
Evolution left a lot to be desired and I think your poem is a great statement on this. As always you make us think when you write these intense poems. Well done.
Felix
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
They will never have a resolve..
Happy Vhristmas & a Hoppy Easter Bunny!
Seriously, Have the best ever whatever you want to have.
x0x0x
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Boy can this be understood!
This is wonderful...Leaves the reader with their own twists and thoguhts.
Pamala
You get to the heart of the matter
" The Blind leading the Blind "
Love your sardonic and acerbic wit
Love
Peter
EDL
though not sure what my ex was\is..
clever quicky here, and from a laywer..huh..lol or lawyer even...
Love Tinka
I know a few that may have actually evolved from something..not sure what it was..and into what is even a bigger mystery.
I like the way you twist this...leaving the reader to examine their own thoughts on the matter.
Great job!
Lisa
nice write.
TX
TRASK
Excellent Lori! Good to read your work...
loved the line" the fit of the fit, unfit" speaks volumes;-)!
Love,
Eileen
Felix
Happy Vhristmas & a Hoppy Easter Bunny!
Seriously, Have the best ever whatever you want to have.
x0x0x
Ron