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They Say
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Evolved, they say
chosen genes

the fit of the fit
unfit

superior, they say
created in an image

searching for meaning
in a pitch-black cave

evolved
they
say
 

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 Reviews of "They Say"
Reviewed by Levi's Lace
Reviewed on December 22, 2005
Lori,
Boy can this be understood!
This is wonderful...Leaves the reader with their own twists and thoguhts.
Pamala

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 13, 2005
Who cares what they say Lori anyway...
You get to the heart of the matter
" The Blind leading the Blind "
Love your sardonic and acerbic wit
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on December 13, 2005
Perhaps 'they' try too hard to glorify their mediocrity. Great write Lori.

EDL

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
LOL. sad sad sad thing is..is some really believe those pics one sees the human race evolving from monkies, if that were so how come there are no throw backs, or half evolved half n half.. yup let em say..
though not sure what my ex was\is..

clever quicky here, and from a laywer..huh..lol or lawyer even...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
Well written Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
Lori,
I know a few that may have actually evolved from something..not sure what it was..and into what is even a bigger mystery.
I like the way you twist this...leaving the reader to examine their own thoughts on the matter.
Great job!

Lisa

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
"They" only revolve around their own circles.
nice write.
TX

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2005
I guess. It seems like sometimes we are evolving backwards.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
like the sarcasm!

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
So very true. R

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Sadly,So They Say,i.e. Dismay! Gladly,You Aren't Included With So They Say,i.e. So Keep On Goin All The Way To End...

TRASK

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Scary area of interest. I like the way you left it; kind of hanging in suspense. ~Carmen~

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Like the ambiance of the last words, "they say."

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Thought provoking mesage /poem to ponder!
Excellent Lori! Good to read your work...

loved the line" the fit of the fit, unfit" speaks volumes;-)!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Evolution left a lot to be desired and I think your poem is a great statement on this. As always you make us think when you write these intense poems. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
They will never have a resolve..
Happy Vhristmas & a Hoppy Easter Bunny!
Seriously, Have the best ever whatever you want to have.
x0x0x

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
We hope, they have evolved enough.

Ron


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