L'Embrassement (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nichole

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Thank you Lori...

Reviewed by Erika Michelle

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

L'beautiful ;0)

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Absolutely beautiful....I love the ending especially!

Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

I took 3 years of French in high school-but have forgotten most of it. Thank you for refreshing my memory with this beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

Beautifully written and translated.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

I wish I had taken French instead of Spanish. Good poem...thank you for the translation! :)

Reviewed by TRASK

Reviewed on June 23, 2002

6-23-02

Unique! Thanks!

TRASK

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on June 23, 2002

If french was your mother tongue I would still have to say this is good.

Reviewed by Alexander

Reviewed on June 23, 2002

I left some parting comments on Steve Patterson's work. I thought you might get a laugh out of it, if they are still there.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan

Reviewed on June 23, 2002

Good luck, Lori. I'm finally leaving this place--I've had enough.

Reviewed by Caryn Day-Suarez

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Magnifique!! Tres' fantastique!

Je taime'

Caryn xo

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

This is beautiful lori I love it. Thank you

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

French always has such a wonderful sound to it.

Your poem is awesome. Short, to the point and a joy to read.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Perfect write from a perfect lady. This worths more than a 10!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

I love French language but cant speak much of it. You have great talents.

Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Ive never been a fan of the pretty rainbow writes but this is quite good, some prety serious imagery

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

translated into perfection...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Wonderful work Lori!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Je suis d'accord avec John. Bien fait, ma belle cherie!

Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Oh my God, Oh..
This is as un imaginable thinking. So deep so touchy. Believe me I dont have words to describe my feelings. Great..great.

Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

I agree with Jay (about the translations) I had Spanish in high school. Ver nice write however.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Simply beautiful Lori..
I am sue your friend
will absolutely love this....

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Tres bien Lori.. une belle poeme!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Exquisite!

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

ms L, enjoyed your art

seulement merveilleux

Reviewed by John

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Good poem, Lori. But shouldn't it be "Mon oeil voit"? Just decided to sign in as John and give some of the folks my real critique.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

I liked it and didnt even understand it...well, the french that is. Nice Lori

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

What a beautiful and peaceful poem. Well done Lori.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

perfection dear heart
josie

Reviewed by atomar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Magnifique!
Tres bien, mon Ami!!
I have yet to experience the touch of god, but you pique my curiousity...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Lori, how can anyone not find this glorious. So much said in so few lines, that's a true gift. I'm impressed with your ability to write in French also...Bravo!!!.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Beautiful Lori! I'm sure your friend will love this.