Voices (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Reviewed on July 29, 2002

WOW.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2002

Oh Lori or Lori! End this despair. There is anohter voice inside of you and it is saying this to the Great One:

"Please Watch Over Me"

Oh Lord please take my hand
make me strong, help me stand
to face all of my enemies.

Oh I know right from wrong
but the days are so long
I need you to watch over me.

Chorus .....

Yes I can't go on - in this world all alone
- hurting the way I do,
For I've fallen so low - with nowhere to go
and I need you to watch over me.

So please watch over me
when I stumble and fall,
Watch over me
when I'm facing a wall,
Watch over me
when I must stand tall,
Watch over me
when the devil calls.
Watch over me
and set me free
from doubt and fear
when my end is near.

Tag .....

Yes please please please
always watch over me
Please watch over me
watch over me
watch over me
watch over me
and set me free.

AND HE WILL SET YOU FREE FROM THE GREATEST
DARKNESS YOU MAY FACE. All the comments made by others say, "We have been in that dark place before. But we held on cause we knew there ws light at the endo of our dark tunnel. The light is there but you must approach it one step at ad time and one day at a time until your journeys end as we all must. The deep darkness always gets better.
You will come out into the light. Bill
P.S. i HOPE THIS POEM CAN HELP YOU AND ALSO SHOW YOU A PLACE WHERE THE LIGHT IS BRIGHTER FOR OUR POETRY. More hugs to you dear.
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� William M. Sowman

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2002

wow lovely piece of art .. u are right voice speak lot of things and this is really a wonderful write keep it up ..

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 24, 2002

Oh Sweetness,

Everyone has said what I'd like to. Just know that I am always here AND I have heard the same demons. Tell shem to shut the fu** up! Love to you, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

It is true, we have all experienced the dark side of ourselves. The destructive side
that whispers to us when we aren't strong enough to ignore them...the murmers
in the middle of the night when everyone else is asleep. However, I know, just
like all of us out there who have heard these 'voices', are strong enough to
fight these battles....for to fight is to eventually win the war. Bright Blessings to you.
;) Silver

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

Voices have no hold over the blessed souls of God. The voices that continues to destroy the pure at heart. Let not satin influence the beauty of a blessed soul. I know his game he has visited me more than once. I talk to God an rebuke his calls. Continue to rebuke him when he calls, He sits in dark corners to catch you off guard. My solution to this laugh at him when he calls, Creations is his targets when he get borded. We will always have the battle of his call, because of the pure at heart. Its only an illusion which seems so real. I have herd the voices many times. He almost got me when I was sad and down. I talk to the master of us all. God has given me strength to over come. You are the winner you are a child of God. Panic is his weapon fear is his call, destruction of a pure an kind soul. Rise my sister satin has no hold.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

This is deep and frightening in it's reality. The picture of you is so lovely Lori!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

Hi Lori,
I agree with everyone..
Stay strong and knock
the hell out of those
voices...

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

Great write Lori....I agree with Amor...

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

you were told as a child
never listen to strangers
the voices you hear are only strangers
dressed as a familiar wind

igonre them and be loved by the silent of morning

well penned ms

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

I've heard this many times, but then I've always heard the one in the mirror.....telling me to stay, there are better days ahead.

Love this emotional write Lori!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

We must have had the same voices today Lori...poetry with same subject matter anyway...you wouldn't believe what I had to go through to defeat them. But, they can be defeated and you can do it too. It does take quite a bit of effort and you must be very strong. There are no quick fixes. Your writing is even more important now.
Amor

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

(((Lori))), I understand where you've been. Great to write it out, to get it out. You write very well. If you ever feel this bad again,
please do not hesitate to call someone and email me. Peace to you.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

peace to you dear heart
josie

Reviewed by TRASK

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

7-22-02

There Are Voices That are Evil & Those That Are Good,i.e. Listen With all Your Heart And, They Will Only Let You Be & Hear Them!

Many Little Children Are In My Voices,Call Them Angels Or Call Them What They Truly Are,i.e. (God)...

Both Evil(Satan) & (God) Talks To You In Mysterious Ways Good and/or Bad,i.e. Be Strong___ And "Scream Evil Satan Be Gone"...

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

Lori, I wish I could stop your voices. I keep myself busy and don't pay my voices any attention, but long ago I use to listen to my voices. The voices always seem to speak the same, what have you got to live for Ron? I'm happy I have many purposes to live, and I hope you find all of your purposes Lori dear.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

You always write with such passion, I can't tell sometimes if it's legit. This is really a potent piece. I remember only one time that I succumbed to the dark voices and I was drunk at the tiem. Hate to admit it but' that's the truth. I was very lucky I had good friends that saved me from myself. I was young at the time. I must say that liquor is such a downer, just the opposite of what people believe it is. It will give you false courage to listen to those voices. Don't drink when your in this mood Lori, please, you are worth so much more than they are.

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

Why do these words scare me. Be strong

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

PB is right about the "dark side"...
And the strength of those voices depends on
what other voices we allow into our mind and
heart. Jay is also right...it's up to you
to choose which voices you will listen to.
We all choose, as a matter of fact...
Now choose to listen to these voices here--
they've given you wise advice...

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

no.-me

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

Lori.......

You have had such a hell of a fight to fight in one so young hun. Hold on Lori, one day those voices will realize they have lost and will leave you in peace.

Love, Light and Concern;
Melanie