Haiku - At the Game (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

Love these kus Lori!!
Especially the visuals of human nature ku second..
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 19, 2009

Splendor in brevity

Reviewed by C. Stone

Reviewed on July 16, 2009

Awesome Haikus expressions and images. especially the "crack of the bat"

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Very nicely done, Lori. I love your Haikus.

Anna

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

good one Lori, there's always someone blocking our view at the wrong time, and I always watch those v of geese flying in amazement, we have quite a bit of them in our area, cheers

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

You hit it out of the park with these haiku - stunning capture!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

3 Winners!

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

Dearest Lori,
The way you express your "ideas" is somewhat akin to putting a volcano inside a coffee cup--far more bubbling forth here than ever could be imagined!

Concise! Provocative! Fun!

You've got a talent, Dear Heart.

Richard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

Three separate 'kus and all, very good.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

Lori all three unique gems! i love them....Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

no three strikes you're out here ;) nicely done, Lori ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

I find myself reading these over and over again. I find that your words evoke a great deal depending on the way I feel. Thank you, Lori. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

NOT HAIKUS BUT DONE VERY WELL WITH GREAT IMAGERY. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

Lori,
These are like the pluck of violin strings, evocative, pithy and well wrought.
John

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

excellent writes all three
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

What Can I Add--Kool.................

TRASK....

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

I love the images, Lori. Nice work.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

As ever your haikus are very descriptive and thought provoking

Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

Great ku's that paint a picture in the mind of a place that mother nature shouldn't be and yet she is...thumbing her nose at man made entertainments.

Fee