Very deeply touching. I remember when my aunt passed away of a brain aneurism in 1960. Nobody saw it coming, and she had been to the doctor not long before complaining about bad headaches. I can, and I think others here can too, identify with this poem. It is sad, but also touching. It just makes you want to reach out and hug this child and tell her everything will be fine. Of course those words would be meaningless at such a time, but will be remembered later on. Thank you sis for this very touching poem.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Deeply, deeply touching. Your tenderness and compassion shine in
every line. Between, we feel the pain and undertanding that
inspired you to create this sad, sweet tribute. Always stay you!
<3 'Pea' <3
BEAUTIFUL WORK LORI...FILLED WITH EMOTION AND DEPTH, YOUR IMAGERY AND PHRASES ARE DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Wow! Concise and beautiful, with not a single word wasted. Absolutely beautiful!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2009
Nothing I can say will surpass what has already been commented, but the innocence of the young lass, not fully understanding, but understanding nevertheless, is heartbreakingly real.
Gulping down the lump in my throat after reading this one Lori, it is so beautiful and so very real. After just attending a funeral not to long ago and yes wearing my black suit and trying to keep my own tears in check to comfort my wife and daughters at the loss of her mother and their grandmother...I felt this deep in my heart. It is pure heart..
hugs
fee
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
It's almost Christmas. Lynn Basil is writing her last book about a secret entrance into the magical doll land of Sha Bebe that she loves so much. Bagannos have taken over the world! Lynn finally meets her dolls in real life. Can she write in a Secret
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May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
moment captured perfectly in the two closing lines.
-gene.
every line. Between, we feel the pain and undertanding that
inspired you to create this sad, sweet tribute. Always stay you!
<3 'Pea' <3
So expressive the "...one petal at a time."
Blessing and Love - Micke
Sheila
Excellent Write On...
TRASK
Your words brought tears. Very beautiful. Thank you, Liz
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Ron
hugs
fee
Take care,
Sherry
Hugs,
Anna
Love,
Ankin
Inspired by Fountain of Trevi
Be always safe,
Karen
must fall,but also with joy for the authors creativity!
Prolly whats needed too.
Ty Dahls
Ch'erie xx
Tremendous charge and power in this delicate, petal-like telling; I love your touch and sensitivity here.
John