The book of life is fool of beautiful dreams, innocence and hopes and sometimes dreams get shattered too...so sad and tru and nothing we can do...
Beautiful poem,
Love Ankin
ONE NEVER KNOWS..OFTEN...OUT OF THE ASHES...COMES BEAUTY. VERY GOOD WRITE THAT IS WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Life is, indeed, like a book unfolding. Unfortunately, these days, I am watching my lifelong imaginings of freedom, rights and a voice amid the masses melting away. My Country is slipping into darkness under the guises of change and hope. In fact, the changes are destroying the hope that has kept us strong as our leaders make choices for us without the ability for our voice to be heard or our votes to be cast. Was it always but a dream that this country was "Of, by and for the people?" This is an outstanding poem, Lori, layered and with a depth of perception that must be perceived by all if we are to survive and continue in greatness.
Take care,
Sherry
a dream no longer valid." Life is like book with revealed events page after page.The dream of life is seen in the book page by page.As the dream fades away the life ends like a lily that whithers away. Beautiful poem dear Lori!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Very nice arrangement of words, Lori. A catalyst for the lost and weary I'm afraid. When dreams are shattered life begins to spin out of control in its hum-drum existence as it waits for the end.
Lori,
Deep and superior evaluation of the facets of imagination, their range and possibilities expressed in excellently wrought images...and the third and final disturbing and challenging for this reader. Fine work.
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Beautiful poem,
Love Ankin
Anna
EDWIN
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
TRASK
Ron
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Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
withered beneath the sun- page by page
a dream no longer valid." Life is like book with revealed events page after page.The dream of life is seen in the book page by page.As the dream fades away the life ends like a lily that whithers away. Beautiful poem dear Lori!
Louisa
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Deep and superior evaluation of the facets of imagination, their range and possibilities expressed in excellently wrought images...and the third and final disturbing and challenging for this reader. Fine work.
John