Two Little Boys..... (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by John Hutchinson

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Little boys-like little Nations...

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on February 11, 2003

i didnt do it! you did... and very good too!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2003

Exactly! Well done...

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 7, 2003

LOL...
Just what I needed this morning...
Brought back some childhood memories...

Trixie

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

Thiswas an excellent piece, reminded me of the fights my brother and I use to get in to!
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

Ha ha ha :D really Interesting ....

What u said was the truth ? When i was a child ... we freiends used to fight .... after a long fight ... there is a time when both realise that what they did was a mistake .. they try to come together ... but dont know how to solve the problem ... and they start saying .... "U hit me first " ... "U Started it first " as if each of them is trying to find problem with the other ... finally most cometo a conclusion becoming friends back this is what chindrens are ...

Wonderful write ...
~sanilnath

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

Thank you, I hadn't thought of my two grown son's all day.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

Hahahaha, this was a blast from the past Lori. Thanks.

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

very cool. Very interesting

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

I can just picture you sticking your tongue out at me, with your nose all scrunched up.
Ahh....you're much too cute to hit.
-James

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Lori, if we fight you can hit me first. Ok.
Bill Murray

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

Great analogy my pretty one.

Love, JC xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

o.k....
come over here.
whack!!!
Just jesting...loved it!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

This is much deeper than at first glance. Much truth here, Lori!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2003

Ahhh excellent with two litle boys here at home I totally enjoyed this(:
Excellent write
Lady G.

Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Your, write is precious.. I love this..
Excellent!
Be blessed,
Betty

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

digression into the childish to remind us of how things really don't much change in the adult scheme of things...**Mari**

Reviewed by Bobert

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

What is this crap? This is bullshit.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

i also see subliminal message here. reminds me of my past relationships. "I rule this playground..." i like that... :)

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Very unique poem so sweet I really enjoyed it

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

That was a lot of fun Lori, wonderful write.

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Very moving ...love it

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

I know children too well, have 4
Great write Lori!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Lori, Excellent! what can I say, you know how little boys act, just like big boys;-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Lorri, I like it. Sometimes little boys grow big and don't grow up.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Yes, what these little boys need is flower power. :) They have gotten too many bad examples. Love is the answer. Very nice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

this sounded like my sister and myself ...fighting for life.....and we did use force......lol..
I wish I could have another blow at her today....because she does not care about me anymore....
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

An outstanding piece Lori.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Super analogy.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Sadly enough...in the end "Gotcha!"

Nice work Lori

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Lori..this is brillian..floria

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Sounds like Tony Blair, Bush and Sadam.

Reviewed by Morchuis

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Hi Lori,
I wonder if they have cyber sticks and bones.-----Morchuis
Ps getting around this site is hard work, getting into it is a work of art,wonder if I am getting parinoiac illusions.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Lori,

You pretty much nailed it! Excellent analogy!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

the escalation of emotions to actions
are so vivid and cleverly hidden
great write as always

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

good write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

Yes this is just the way it is. Profound write, Lori!