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Why Fence in the Sea?
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Here I am in 1959 with my cousin. We used to swim in Tijuana River's mouth and walk all the way to Mexico. No one thought anything of it way back then. . . and now the government has built a fence into the sea. Please click on the link below the poem for pictures.


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A rusty fence stands beaten back, stretching into the breakers
 

The waves run high and rough here.
 

Surfers idolize the place.
 

Officials stand obdurate:  the fence
 

Might keep those people out.
 

As if a line into the sea is not a beacon
 

Of how much farther one must struggle
 

To reach the promise of life in a promised land.
 

 
 

It is a dangerous fence, jagged, torn,
 

Bent, curling in upon itself.
 

Immigrants gawk at its clear signal.
 

Locals decry its ugliness.
 

Is the nation's border safer from danger.

Only the sea’s serenity is wounded,
 

Shafted by mankind’s hubris, those futile attempts
 

To split the very sea into ours and theirs.
 


 

Eileen Clemens Granfors, copyright, 2008

 

 

Scroll way down the attached web site for better pictures of the fence.
 



 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Why Fence in the Sea?"
Reviewed by Amy Feemster
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
your words are an eye opener, I would have liked to walk into Mexico with no borders, you've made a profound statement I think. Amy.

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
I have enjoyed the background story and the photos.

This writing stimulates thoughts on fraternity and Justice. It is inspiring and profound... A poem that adds value to Poetry.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I see the sea in a differing direction, watching the sunrise rather than the sunset & I have also surfed the Atlantic all my life but love to see those swell swells rolling into California, but I couldn't live there what with the ground shaking every now and then, and wild fires and mudslides and etc etc...Ed

Reviewed by Andrew Jalbert
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Beautiful Eileen...I think we look at the sea the same way.

Andy

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
That last line is truly profound. Thanks for the courageous effort.

Reviewed by dana everhart (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
I suppose it depends which side of the border you are on

Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Eileen,

Sadness, indeed...very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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