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Poking Out on Pavement
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I didn’t learn to drive
‘til I was almost out of school…
and then I only learned to drive
along the county’s gravel roads.

For those who’ve never traveled one,
I’ll give a brief description…
They only have one lane on them
and it is in the middle.

Along the rock lined roads I drove
with smiling ease and grace.
My confidence waxed strong until…
My dad sent me to PAVEMENT!


I took my younger brother with—
to give me help and courage-
That black road really scared me, cuz
it had TWO lanes to drive on!!


I was scared, and rather frightened
when I got out to the road- -
because there weren’t no lines on it
to guide me down the lane!


And then I had myself a thought,
a marvelous revelation!
I had my brother put his head
outside the pick-up window! :~)


I had him tell when I came
too close to danger’s edge,
and when I strayed too far away
from the asphalt’s same smooth lip…


And I was happy and serene
as we traversed that pavement…
with brother’s behind by my side
and his head poked out the window!

 
 


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 Reviews of "Poking Out on Pavement"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 19, 2008
This is sooooooooooooooooo cute. I could picture the whole episode it was great and funny. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
I love this! I learned to drive on unpaved country roads myself - a standard transmission no less. I must confess I still prefer a "back road" to a super highway anyday. I very much enjoyed this piece.

Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Outstanding story-poem... "Poking Out on Pavement" takes one to the teen's time.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
HAHAHA, Don't know why I laugh, my ex nearly killed us... There in 88, but you drive on the wrong side....

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
great to have an earthly copilot
:) pax A

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
...perhaps a slice of lost Americana you pen here...if only more old roads now gone...would be reborn...the old beauty lost in the fast indifferent stops of the new speedways. ...and we are driven with your pen...well done...
John

Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Cryssa,

I remember those country lanes, those winding roads...the one behind the woods behind our house was Millsboro Lane. Hilly? Shoot. My brother would take the car and try to jump 'em...rollercoaster rides had nothing on him! LOL Thanks for the memories, love this one.

Hope your brother remembered to pull his head in for traffic! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Superb imagery in this one, Cryssa; enjoyed! Well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
...and a Road Trip on 66 from California to Chicago, a bumpy ride, but what a ride!!!!!!! now we have only boring highways...
Thanks for taking me back there once more.

Georg


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