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I Must Have Lied
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Have you done everything you wanted to do? I realize, I have.


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I Must Have Lied
 
At various stages of our life we question what we’ve done.
Did we make progress, did we reach our goals, and did we have fun?
But on no occasion in the past did I have the time as I do at present.
My children’s all grown, I’m alone a lot and my mates off shooting pheasant.
 
So I have all the time I need to ponder what in life I’ve done.
I raised incredible children, had a successful career, and yes, I had fun.
But there are still things I’d like to do before my time runs out.
I’d like to try different things, isn’t that what life’s about?
 
For I never saw Elvis in person, which has always been a regret.
I don’t want another, if I do nothing, then that’s what I’ll get.
 I’d like to try sky diving by jumping from a plane to the ground.
I like to skin dive and watch the exotic fish swim all around.
 
I’d like to go back to school and learn so much more.
I’d like to climb mountains and watch the Eagles soar.
There are so many things in life that I haven’t even tried.
So when I said I had lots of fun, I must have lied.
 
No!
I brought three successful children in this world, they brought tremendous bliss,
So there’s nothing in this world I regret and there’s nothing I have missed.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 
 
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "I Must Have Lied"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
No lies, Baby Girl! Sounds like you did everything well! Just shoo them, should have, would have, could have thoughts right outta yore head! I have learned that there are no truly happy lives, just happy moments that make life worth livin. Another Super Write! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
But you'll still do more; and that's the icing on the cake! Good poem, nice easy going style with rhyme and a good message
Enjoy your retirement (if you can get your hubby off the hunting and fishing trips long enough!)
best, michael guy

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
You are truly a sucess Bonnie, because raising children is probably the hardest profession anyone can have
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
So...in my opinion, you are very successful already!!! Enjoy life!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
And... you continue to write about all that you have learned...for us!
Cryssa

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Wonderful achievement. You poem can make a beautiful success story

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Bonnie,
I know the feeling of having the children all grown up with families and careers of their own and you are left wondering if there is something missing. I think if we stop dreaming and setting goals for ourself we stop living. Enjoyed your poem, sweet lady.


Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Wonderful writing, Bonnie; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Bonnie,
Sweetly written, so much accomplished, Take care Valerie

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
A good Mother you are and were and always will be. This is truly a write from your heart and is to be passed around to those who think a MOther isn't special and who want to know that they are very special people indeed. Thanks Bonnie, this is great writing.

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Iam sure I would be satisfied.

Tony


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
I love the way you write this poem especially the ending.Your 3 children gives you peace and 100% happiness and I know in my heart that they appreciate it very much.You are a wonderful and beautiful person and human being :-).You know in sports they have an MVP award for a player,well in your children's eyes you are the MVM(Most Valuable Mother).Always remember that.Take good care of yourself.

Edwin

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Hello Bonnie May,

I like this poem and the style, the rhyme ....and the message. You being a mother (like me) had the most challenging and demanding career in life and it is the best achievement ever to raise children into responsible, productive, and caring adults, so give yourself a
big pat on the back- you did well!!!
Cynthia

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
Diving is a blast, also gotta try surfing or at least body surfing, but jumping out of a perfectly good airplane, now thats just "plane" nuts...e & R

Reviewed on September 14, 2008
This is beautifully penned, Bonnie, you did the best you could and came out brilliantly. Well done, and congratulations: the legacy you leave behind is your love.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
If I could get into "your space," I'd feel a lot better. I have three wonderful children as well. They never cease to amaze me. I think what you express here could be great therapy for those of us who always thing we are under achievers. Thank you, Bonnie. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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