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The End (senyru)
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thank you jerry...jerry was kind enough to point out that this is a senryu rather than a haiku...something i did not know until he told me.




You caused the pain
And you made the teardrops flow
Then you walk away
 

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 Reviews of "The End (senyru)"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Short, and bittersweet...been there, haven't we all?

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
I can not differentiate between the different styles I'm afraid all I know is whether I like the way something rolls off my tongue and is digested by my brain. This one was smooth on both counts. Well done Sue.

Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Yes this is a sad ku but written very well.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Great Haiku with a painful message

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Ouch!
Hits right on.
John

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
It happens once too often, Sue.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Nice expression.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Good Haiku showing emotion.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Good very good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Good one Sue! Smack Dab on point;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
And that, my friend, is the end. Not much left to say. Good.


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