The Tease... (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

But she is certainly beautiful, when her head is white with snow, or golden with the fall leaves.
Your poem is also so beautiful, thanks for sharing
love and peace

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Yes, she's quite the emotional coquette, playing with our lives!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

But ain't being teased more fun...

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Tease may be but it is tease that really makes life exciting. Where will we be if there is no teasing? Need some fun too, Sue. But you made it a beautiful poetry and it flows so well to hold the reader spellbound and smiling. Do read my today's poem, Sue.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Yep, but sometimes a tease is such fun...ed

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

mother nature is moody blue and hot orange in one day, and you caputure her capricious nature well.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Sue,
Nature holds us in check. She can most assuredly wave her wand and get us to do exactly the predictable...but we have no control over her at all. Yes, she does tease..and she does it with a magical flair!
Excellent poetry Sue!

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Wow this is your very best ever...thanks girl...no wonder she's..Woman...right?

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

EXCELLENT!! Just wonderful poetry, Sue, and yet so easy and "chatty" in its style. Fantastic concept, mood and tone. Love this flirtatious piece and the angle that this Mother can also be Coquette. And don't she bring out that side of our nature's too?! I am keeping this - one of your best, I think - and there have been a few! Bit of a Bunny Girl write this seems to me - do you have them in America?! TY LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

such beauty is to behold not hold ... it pleases with tease ...

you have worked this truism well into this poem ...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

This is so funny, yet so true, and so funny and so sad, and soooo much...oh well, she is like us, or are we like her? Thnx Sue for sharing, I enjoyed this very much. May the Lord be with you, and at your side always. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very dear friend in Wisconsin, and sister in Christ our Lord,

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

This is so true Sue and hey I did not mean the pun but this is a beaut.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Sue, fantastic perspective,love the approach
and how you expressed it a beautiful gem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

She's been giving me the cold shoulder alright. Great concept

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Very true sue and today she is being a frigid "bit_h here in Nova Scotia with one more snowfall and another night of freeezing temperatures so as your poem suggests Ihope she hurrys up and spreads her legs I need it. lol

Whimsical write,
Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Sue,

Unless she visits Texas; then she's a full bore monster LOL

As you can tell, I hate Texas weather--it's either too hot or too cold (HA!), too dry or too rainy, DEFINATELY too stormy...and here I am, in Tornado Alley, and there are no freaking basements! LOL

Send me to Alaska, where the only thing I'll see is snow and perhaps a bear and the Northern Lights. :)

Enchanting write--enjoyed your Natural display rather than what we had last night JAYS whatta storm!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Sometimes a tease is fun... or maybe it is just fun to tease. Very good!