Take me someplace
I haven’t been
Take me to heaven
And back again
Take me to the stars
Show me the moon
I can’t go right now
But I will come soon
Right there darling
Stay awhile
Push that little button
Make me smile
This is a rhyme
To show you the way
Do like I show you
I’ll do what you say
We can have fun
Playing this game
Just keep it up
I'll be calling your name
Thnx sis, for making me smile today. I had a little bad and good news mixed, when I saw the orthopedic doctor yesterday. He said that my right forearm has two hairline fractures, but they are healing nicely on their own. That is why I have such pain in my right forearm right now, but it does seem to be getting better. This is a wonderful poem, and I could see the sensuality in it. You do have a way with words sis (giggles). May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very dear sister in the written word, and in Christ our Lord,
This is kind of like an adult nursery rhyme. Great job. I could almost dance to it :>)
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2005
Sue you are too much You really got me on this one. I thought it was going to be one of those excuse me what did you say things. surprise! but you did this poem so well. Thanks Sue You are one of a kind and I love ya!
Love Tracey xoox
Vesna:)
Nice little rhyme.
Blessings,
Joseph
Love from India - Joel -
A.S.
Paul;-]
Barbie,
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
a heart throb
William .....peace & Love
Allen
Beautiful Sue
Love and peace
Love Tracey xoox