I'm Going to be Sorry... (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

may we all learn from this, Sue....excellent.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

Excellent write.

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

You express much truth about the human condition and many of your readers will relate. Thank you, Sue. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

super piece Sue, after reading it my thoughts were of not slipping in the same old dodo. I've been fighting hard not to repeat past stupid mistakes. G

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Yeah the new ones to look forward to
"newer future ones"
I can't wait to make mine lol Elation
is much better than pain also I might
add. ;) This is great!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

ROFL. 'Twas great! I feel your pain. ;p ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Yeah, better look forward for a better future. Why worry about the past that is forgotten anyway?

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Great write, Sue.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

A point in life we all seem to keep crossing

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Funny how we can get stuck in time and dwell on things no one else may even remember.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

aye, it seems the mistakes multiply and the big ledger book has more minus than plus, more debit than credit, but life can always change for the better, just keep making new mistakes and new journeys. k

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

You perfectly capture the human condition of being poised between hope and despair. This is funny and sad and very real. Thanks.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

(Giggles) this is sad and funny at the same time, especially those last few lines (giggles). Good write sis. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((HUGGGGGGSSSSSSS))))))))))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Whine and pine. Many women do. Thats why we fix our cars all the time..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

I don't know whether to laugh or cry about this one, Sue - I'm sure all of us will have some newer future ones, too!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

rant on, baby girl; that is all i can say! splendid rant; nobody can rant as well as you do! LOL well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mark Carroll

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Very nice, and thanks for your comments.

I think the last line intrigues me the most...

to be continued

I like that this makes me think. Good write.

Mark

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Whine and write on Sue, you do it beautifully!;-)

etw

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Sue,

"...I'm so tired of hearing me whine...." That line is alone worth the price of admission! Keep whining...er, I mean, writing...I'd hate to see the end--

An excellent rant--

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

well said. well read. iask the same ???'s, and thank GOD for the "to be continued". don't much care for the alternative.
TX

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Yip to be continued !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Well Sue my little buddy you have piqued my curiousity with this one and I will be wondering until you share with us the continuation and I hope it is a ray of sunshine for your heart because I think it is big enough and deserving enough to handle it. Great suspense anyway.

Felix

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Sue, Real funny treatment of a serious subject. I had a good chuckle, Thanks. Henry