I woke to feel you there
In the room
Not on the bed
I knew you were there
By some intangible means
Not a sound, or an aroma
But more of a feeling of expectancy
My body awoke
While my mind still drifted
My breasts stood at attention
And my hips shifted
To a more accessible position
Not planning
Just reacting
I wanted you to come to me
But I didn’t say a word
The need would bring you
Like your presence awoke me
Without thought
Response
We come together
Like rain and the wind
Like earth and the sea
Reaction
Me to you, you to me
We come together
Ahhh there you are
You…. and me
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Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Dreamy, passionate and haunted -- a complex write well done!
This is wonderful, Sue. When there is chemistry, the very thought of each other can be more powerful than words. Subtly erotic, very well written.
Take care,
Sherry
Blimey!! That's some emotional intelligence you got goin there, Sue, if your whole body stands to attention even before you are properly conscious and your mysterious "presence" has not yet advanced... "Present Arms" or what?! Hope his sword drill is up to it... sounds like you expect it to be! Seriously, this is a delight and extremely stimulating - any night of the week... or morning, come to that! You must share your secrets of the "beckoning call"! Honest and sensitive. I just so admire your always upfront style. WTG, Lady! Kate xx
awwwwwww so romantic sis. Thnx, this brought a smile to my lips. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), your big little sister, Barbie
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He is so lucky, Sue
Love and peace
Huda
This was sensual and erotic, and subtle at the same time. Wonderful poem indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Take care,
Sherry
nicely done! Eileen
Paul;-]
And ahhhhhhhhhh, there you are, penning anticipatory peasures to arrive. Delightful, beautiful words and write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
nice seductive write. smooth flow. seductive but not erotice.
i likey :).
TX
thanks for sharing
William ....Peace
NOT spspspspeaking my mind hee-hee!!
Love Tinka
This is very stimulating. What were you thinking about? Do not worry I know.
Excellent write! I love this one.
Emeka
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."