AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Bryon Smith, iMaria Rushing, iJay Dubya, iScott Zachary, iGracie McKeever, iJoshua Su, iFrances Altman, iTracey Morait, iJohn DeDakis, iCheri Clifton, i

  Home > Action/Thriller > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Sue Hess

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 774 Titles
· 7,044 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Sue Hess, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



Don't Wait Up
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
   Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Don’t wait up for me tonight
Me and this bottle are going around
And before the night is over
One of us is going to win
Don’t try to help me cope
I have to do this alone
Alone…except for this bottle
It’s the one thing that is always there
Follows me thru my life
Like a monkey on my back
And before this night is done
Me or the bottle is going to go
And it’s something I need to do alone
Alone
Except for this bottle
And this need
Don’t wait up for me
Its going to be a long night

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Don't Wait Up"
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 9, 2006
Wow, your writing is always so real. This is exceptional, Sue. A bit raw, just like life is.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
I love this poem. You have delivered this with artistic grace and style. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
That monkey can be hell - my dad died with that monkey on his back. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
My Hubby sings this song on a daily basis...seems to forget he did the same thing yesterday and the day before!!

Thanks for the sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Don’t wait up for me
Its going to be a long night

Having spent one too many of those long nights, I know those morning afters are pure hell.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Sue you captured the drinker's thoughts in this poem and through the words his/her underlying pain and aloneness. Advice is easy to give but some things just need to be done by themselves. (or with a bottle)

Fee

Reviewed on September 20, 2006
I knew that particular monkey - haven't gotten rid of them all - but I knew that particular one, and a load of other guys who were weighed down by the same type. That's just one beast we struggle with. Someone once said to me that there are also two dogs fighting inside us for control. Whichever one we fed the most won. Yeah, life can be one heck of a long lonely dark night. Not much comfort I know, but you know the score only too well. Thank you for sharing. Thinking about you.



New Poetry by Sue Hess
Popular Poetry (Action/Thriller)
  1.  Reminder To Myself
  2.  I Walk Quietly and Reflectively
  3.  Was
  4.  Cherishing Sounds of Silence
  5.  GOLD ?
  6.  This Aging Moon
  7.  Creepy, Creepy, Scary
  8.  Erotica
  9.  Somewhere They Dance with Angels
  10.  The Toads at Tedder Hall by Jane Air
  11.  Line Drawn In Sand
  12.  BEAUTIFUL LACE
  13.  Best Answers: In Politics and In Life
  14.  Forest Of Dreams
  15.  Release the Demon
  16.  THE GAME
  17.  Beringia
  18.  Kulturparken Småland: A Mirror of Hope
  19.  WE Art Democracy Diversity 1 to 10
  20.  Orphaned Slab
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The Socialist Cuckooland by Robert Liu

The Socialist Cuckooland is fiction based on historical facts. Against an Orwellian backdrop, Barry Lee lives in fear and struggles for survival.  
Member BookAds

Returning Home Series (Novels 1-3) by Trennis Killian

Boom! Pain! Blackness! After an RPG attack on their barracks in Afghanistan, corpsmen, Amber Fox, Luke Owens , Wade Scott and Ross Miller wake up in an Army hospital in Germany. Thus, begins a months long recovery for all of them. A  
Member BookAds

Partial Justice! (Ford Valley Corruption Series # 3) by Trennis Killian

Will Justice overcome the Ford Valley Corruption! Ford Valley is corrupt because of the Fords. Newly elected Sheriff Todd Mercer has improved the Sheriff Department. However, can Sheriff Mercer and his committee fight to change the corrupti  
Member BookAds