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Ouch!!
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He said it was the worst thing that had ever happened
To him
His heart was broken and he would never be the same
I was sure the pain was real, but I couldn’t help
But wonder
The worst pain he had ever suffered was it
Then he had never seen his child
Suffer the pains of addiction
Watched his mother pour that glass of scotch
That you both knew was one too many
Never seen his father’s shoulders hunched in defeat
When the pink slip came with his paycheck
He had never seen the eyes of a child
When there was no Christmas tree or toys
Felt the agony of an old woman
As she watched her husband of 70 years
Placed in his grave
Painful though it is, failed romance
Just cannot compare

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 Reviews of "Ouch!!"
Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
excellently expressed

Reviewed on October 9, 2003
One big OUCH!, too, Sue! This leaves an unsettling nerve... great write...stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Seventy years, I love marriage but Jeeese.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
A truthful look at fools. Very good poem Sue, I have missed you. I hope that you are well.

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
this really gets in deep sue, bravo, al

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
sad and heartfelt,
yet an excellnt write all the same

William

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Well penned and very decriptive, thanks for sharing this piece with us.

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Reviewed on October 8, 2003
ouch! i felt the pain in this one clear as anything! a heartwrenching write; thanks for sharing! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. >tears <

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Whoa... puts it all into perspective doesn't it? Once again Sue, good work!

Reviewed on October 8, 2003
(((sue)))

*ouch* i felt the heartbreak in this one *tears*

well done, dramatically illustrated

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(


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