Nightmare (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 3, 2007

Linda,

Very sad and poignant write my friend. Bless You.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2007

Stunningly sad Realities
written by a pro.
Thanks for sharing Linda.
With love,
Ron

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

Nightmares are like walking in heavy molasses up to the ankles, you want to run but you can't, you want to stop but star to sink.
Man can have nightmares when asleep, the worst ones are the ones that you have when you are awake.
Very well done!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Interesting, this really would be a nightmare! Very descriptive and well written.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Very emotional and in your face work that says so much in four short stanzas about the real life day to day suffering of this our world. Sad but needed to be said and your voice is strong and clear for all who take the time to listen.

Fee

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Applause to you Linda! I think you've captured every nightmare imaginable in this write. Excellent write.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

While Others Turn Look Other Way Our Most Compasionate Lady A D Enlightens Your Souls,i.e. Opens Your Blind Eyes...

Your True Friend TRASK

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

I saw these as living nightmares in my former work among men with social and behavioural problems. One guy drank himself into a stupor every day. He felt guilty about the death of his wife and kids in a car crash in which he was the driver. It was an accident but he never recovered mentally. Eventually he died through drink related causes. Tragically, it was what he wanted. Living nightmares are tortuous.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

gut-wrenching incidents, to be sure! the last thing we want to happen to us. thanks for posting

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Wow! What horrible nightmares that are reality to many! Each of the scenerios are heart wrenching...a thought provoking write my friend, you've penned it well! A harsh look at reality for many! Always a pleasure to read your work...
Blessings from the mountains of Kentucky,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Wow!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Indeed, Linda, Nightmare. Each scenario wrends the heart--excellent capture of things gone horribly wrong. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

All of them truly horrendous nightmares, Linda.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Heartwrenching write, Linda; you do these so well! BRAVA, very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <