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Dear Jesus
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
  
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Dear Jesus

I really don't want to bother you..
I don't know what else to do.
Could I have a new Mommy today?
Would you consider it if I pray?
I want a Mommy with long , flowing hair
One who is loving..one who will care.
One who won't go out and drink all nite
Leave me alone till the morning light.
I want a Mommy who won't hurt me
Or beat me so hard that I can't see.

Please Jesus
Send me a Mommy who hugs every day
One who takes me to the park to play.
One that don't scream at me or make me cry
Intill I hide within myself till I want to die.
Send me a Mommy who will fix my meals
One who will kiss my boo-boo's till they heal.
I've never had that in my life, you see
Never a Mommy who really loves me
Never a Mommy to keep me from the cold
Not even a Teddy Bear for me to hold.

Now Jesus
Please don't make me wait, I need her now
This Mommy don't love me anyhow.
Mommy hates me..she says I'm bad
Mommy broke my arm once..such pain I had.
How long will it take you to pick one for me
One of your angels will do if she is free.
I'm tired of living in pain and in fear
I want a Mommy who will hold me near
Give me a Mommy who will love me , I pray
Jesus, I can't wait...bring her today.

© Linda Hill 2003


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 Reviews of "Dear Jesus"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Touching!
You love the children and GOD loves you.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by debra pruett (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
linda i to am an advocate for children god bless you

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Compassionate write. My mother once forced a rusty nail completely through my foot because I cried when I stepped on it, weekly she'd force my head under water when she bathed me or washed my hair . . . some folks shouldn't have children.
Without His love, I wouldn't have made it!
Sandy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
1-03-03

(God) Takes All Little Children Into HisWorld,
Around Him In His Arms and, Those Of Holy Mother, His Wife Cannot Give Them Enough Hug's, Enough Caring, Enough Of Everything Denied Little Children In This F--ked Up Physical World,i.e., (God) Call's In Time Of Need___
You Linda Will MeetMe, TRASK There,As Far As The Eye Can See All These Little Chidren Are Forever So Free..

Your Friend, Tear's __TRASK

Reviewed on January 3, 2003
so sad! but a very good write that clearly shows the innocence of a little child! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( >tears <

Reviewed by Dennis Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
Thanks for the warm welcome...
such a painful write this was.
Dennis

Reviewed by Sanilnath
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
Sad Write .... But ... Excellent ... Excellent ... Excellent ...



~Sanil

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
Oh Linda,,what sorrow I feel. And when there is one like her,,that is one too many. You are a true child advocate. Bless You,,Lisa

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
Linda this is a painful piece so full of sorrow. Great write.
Drkman

Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
This touches the heart, I share in the feelings left by the others.
Allen

Reviewed by Becky Boyer
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Painfully wrote. It's sad to know that this is truley happening somewhere. My heart breaks for these children. I would love for her to come home with me where love is welcomed.
Zack and Jakes mom

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Heart wrenching write here, Linda...
Tragically, too many children are not loved and treated as they should be.


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