a good poem uses as few words as possible to convey its theme and that you've done ...
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Unfortunately it seems to be the only way to achieve it, Kay. Hopefully, if humankind doesn’t blow the world apart, we may one day find a better solution, to this terrible crisis!!! Outstanding poetry!!!
Love conquers all , even War..which is sometimes necessary in the Grand Scheme of Things !!
Sweet and succinct .
Peter Paton
Reindeer
Strong message, and so well delivered.
Well written.
Warm wishes
Elga
Love and war seem to conflict with each other, don't they? This gives us something to think about. Short but to the point. I like it.
Patty
Love Tinka
TRASK
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Good to see you back again
Love Ch'erie
Short sweet and powerful love the idot Peace here....
Peggy