Desert Dawn (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

Beautiful!

...As the starry night lights go out one by one...
...Mallards paddling two by two...
...In this, my quiet time, as the world yawns...

Oh Sherry. You are the most Magnificent Artist. Your eyes behold the beauty of the world and just brings that morning forth before mine.
Exquisitely superb. / (I wish I knew other words to describe this undescribable poem of sheer beauty)
Thank You so much xoox
Tracey

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 2, 2005

Absolutely beautiful poetry, Sherry! Thank you!

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on March 1, 2005

Sherry,
Written with such beauty. You make the Desrt Dawn visiable to all who read this work.

Sherry

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

You have illustrated the mystic nuance that is the desert. Makes me wish I could visit more and let its stark sun parse me to my simple essence like all the lives there very long.

Ron

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

These are words this reader can feel
and that is a powerful reach
bravo
pax A

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Wonderful poetry with an ending that is sublime and divine.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Very colorful and poetic; a lovely ending.

Joy and sunshine

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

You paint a beautiful picture with your words, Sherry. That is the ultimate, is not it, to become one with our Creator.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Sherry, What a masterpiece! I swear I was transported to your favorite Desert place!
Absolutely stunning work. I must keep this one, my friend.
The vibrant colors just reach out and grasp the mind, I can't tell you how close this made it all become.
Great write Sherry! Just great.

Lisa

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Super Sherry, "I peacefully breathe in the wonders of this land." Many times I do this. G

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Sherry,

Beautiful imagery! Soothing and serene! I love the dawn of the day and you have painted the "Desert Dawn" to perfection! Thanks for sharing.

Cynthia

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Sherry this is incredibly beautiful, such images!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Oh Sherry, how lovely this is, such beautiful imagery in this excellent and lovely poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

beautifully captivating!!!
very inspiring to get out there
and take in nature's mornings!!!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Awesome, stunning, vivid imagery, wonderful cadence, provocative message...Somebody stop me! :-)
Great work, Sherry.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

You can always tell the quality of a poem by the way your mind without effort finds it's way into seeing and feeling each line. I really felt I was there. TY

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Beautiful imagery and ambience in your poem Sherry!
"In this, my quiet time, as the world yawns
I peacefully breathe in the wonders of this land
And become one with the Creator of it all"

:)
Take care
Nila

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Makes me wish I still lived out west. You have captured the essence of the desert wonderfully.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Too real, makes me wish I was sitting there having a cup of coffee and watching this tremendous scene unfold with you. I have never been to your edge of the world but your description sure puts a longing in my heart to see it some day.

Hugs,

Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

C'est merveilleux, Sherry. Merci! Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Absolutely stunning piece Sherry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Dear Sherry,

Absolutely beautiful poetry, such a wonderful sense of peace and serenity exuding from your words, gorgeous write Sherry.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

exceptional imagery and wonderful mood into a truly inspired direction ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Sherry, this one is inexplicably beautiful. I'm going to keep it and imagine myself in the midst of a desert dawn during my own morning meditation time. Surrounded by menacing icicles (in Atlanta!), Dawn

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Sherry I don't know if I can do you any justice with my words of praise. I am stunned by the power and beauty of your words in this magnificent poem! I can't say more because I fear I will sound insincere. Please just know that this is one that I will keep and savour. Truly beautiful!
Love Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

A keeper for sure! What splendid imagery in this gem Sherry!
I can get lost in the ambiance you created and the vivd
word painting, visuals are fantastic!

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love,eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Yes Michelle is right this one is really a wonderful way to start the evening here.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Fine wine indeed.

Just love these images.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on January 29, 2005

Ah, this is like sipping a fine wine. Smooth, delightful, sensual. Loved it Sherry! Michelle