This is what I really like in poetry. It's easy to read and I don't have to guess what your saying.
Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
Big smile on the last stanza. It's a great piece.
Janet & Alan
Reviewed by Inam Khaskheli (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
really i enjoyed to read it .
very nice.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
I enjoyed this very well written and creative verse!!
What discipline! Like the meter, like the rhyme...and like those poems that express without either, too!!
Janet & Alan
very nice.
What discipline! Like the meter, like the rhyme...and like those poems that express without either, too!!
You have done a great piece of art with this. In my humble opinion, this is great work.
Well, I mostly write my expression. I don't know what they're called. I write when I feel the urge to write. I don't think of poetry when I write.
Of course poetry is an art. It has to be done the right way, it has to have great meters and great rhymes at the same time.
Yes, it is called "Art" for the artistically inclined, yet not too many people from the public are artistically inclined.
I only write for my friends (those who like to read my work) and myself only.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$