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Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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The Warrior And I
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I saw you today,
But I pretended I didn’t…
I looked away,
But watched you just the same-
Part of me wanted to run to you,
Hold your hand,
Pretend our fight never happened…
But
The survivor in me,
Held my hands tight behind my back,
And kept my head down,
Eyes cast on the ground…
And
The Warrior in me,
Snarled harshly in my ear:
“Don’t you dare!”
And we watched you walk away-
The Warrior and I,
We watched,
And I wept…

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 Reviews of "The Warrior And I"
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
A wonderful poem...you will overcome...beautiful.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
this was an excellent statement of getting over one love and living on nice job on this poem it was wonderful

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Reindeer,excellent piece...poignant and yet powerful.
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Retta, excellent poem but every once in awhile the warrior must lose.

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
fabulous

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
excellent, Rhetta, I loved it. The warrior in me, the savior in me, catchy, and so apt a description of what keeks us safe from our own mistakes. Good write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Another fine poem.
~E

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
3-13-03

Excellent__ Now Don't Look Back!

TRASK

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Beautiful and emotional, =hug=
Love your poems Reindeer

Tom

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Dear Retta, Excellent Write, but so sad!

ty
tony

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Very well done Reindeer.
Jack

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Heart felt. Excellent write.


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