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Child of the Moon
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She was a child of the moon,
Black hair studded with silver stars,
Her eyes as blue as the midnight sky,
Her skin like honey dew,
And he loved her,
This tall and golden man,
Hair like corn silk on wild green stem,
He was the day,
That loved the Midnight Goddess…

She played upon the meadows,
Surrounded by the gentle fairies,
How they danced around her!

But he, this man bound by the Earth,
Was too slow and heavy to follow,
Yet he was content to gaze upon her,
From his hidden hollow…

He had found her one dew-drop morning,
Sitting on a moss covered stone,
Playing with the stars that fell from her hair…
Though frightened she had stayed,
For his gentle beauty attracted her affections,
And she stayed until the coming of the day-

When Dawn began to hue,
She ran, no rather she flew
Into a jungle so vast,
He knew he could follow but never pass
Through those trees that blocked his path…

Still he loved her,
For she was a part of his soul
That he had never known…
And the days passed in a blur…

He plucked golden flowers,
That flourished in the gentle showers,
And the blood red roses that knew too much,
Tried to pass them into her hand,
But alas,
Was forced to watch with such sadness,
As they fluttered to the ground,
And died without making a sound…

Thus he learned to be content,
To watch her dance whenever he got the chance,
And though Night and Day were separated by Dawn,
He knew she would never be gone long,
Was happy enough to wait for eternity’s end,
When day and night would finally blend,
And these two ill-fated lovers would be together again…


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 Reviews of "Child of the Moon"
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
A masterpiece of beauty, I love the rich imagery in this...most excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
outstanding write Retta!!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Oh I could get lost in this one hun.. Loved it..

Will have to save this one to come back and read and re read...

Love;
Melanie

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Hi Reindeer,
Ohhhh, This is sooo outstanding...

Excellent...

Trixie :)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003
pretty write, reindeer! enjoyed~ love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Retta,
I am just going to echo Robert, and add a Wow also. I will be reading this over and over!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
What a fantastic love story ... I enjoyed it so much!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Really enjoyed reading your stuff.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
What a vision this evokes!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This is a vision of mystery among all of our childhood fantasies of growing love. Augh to dream and to be blessed with a poem like yours. Hans Christian Anderson is proud tonight.

Love and Peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Bravo, I salute you!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
I love reading your work. It is so meaningful and deep.

this is just wonderful

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
You have such depth in your writing Reindeer, beautifully expressed, very touching...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Reindeer
sigh the imagery and verses are so enchanting and vivid so beautiful as only you my dear can do
Love Peggy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
your heart is deep, your poem is just overwhelming...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
So vivid, superb poem..

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Retta, everything you write comes to life and glows in my mind like sparkling jewels. You dear a a great great talent. Bill

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Your work always keeps my interest...

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Beautifully Written, Retta!


tony

Reviewed on May 22, 2003
I am in agreement with Bette on this one. You never disappoint.....LOL

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
"...Hair like corn silk on wild green stem,..."

I know this is a metaphor, but...it boggles my mind and sent me into hysterics. rofl. Love this work though. You never disappoint.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This is beautiful! Full of great images and descriptions.


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