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The Things You Say...
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The Things You Say…



It’s the little things,
I love about you,
The way you say;
"Hey hey..."
And I know something important
Is coming my way...

The inflections in your voice,
The way you dip your head,
When you smile,
The sound of your laughter
Stays with me for a while...

I smile when I think of it,
it’s a lovely sound,
I miss it so much,
When you're not around...

You ease back the night,
And my world is not so dark,
You bring with you the light,
I feel my heart,
Start beating again,
At a quicker pace…

My blood begins to race-
And I smile,
For the first time all day-
Just talking to you,
Makes me feel this way...

"Hey, hey..."
I hear you say...
"What?”
I reply,
Only to hear you say;
"I love you..."
And all I can do is smile
and whisper back;

"I love you too..."



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 Reviews of "The Things You Say..."
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Such beauty, tenderness and love abounds in this wonderful write Retta!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2003
I enjoyed this deeply..... what part of I love you NEVER feels good :) Your heart is beautiful. Thoughts and memories and loving to live for love today is just simply----LIVING! Excellent EXCELLENT work!

Than you,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Sweet and lovely wonderful poem Reindeer!

Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Often, it's the things your man DOESN'T say that mean the most. But I do loooove his voice. :) Nice poem, Retta! Emotionally charged!!


Jules :)

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Isn't the magic held in a loved ones voice just the best thing ever? I loved this.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
It is the small things that show true love.
Wonderful write.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
A touching write Retta.

Nancy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Oh Those Thing's You Say, Watch Out Those Games People Play On Your (Soul) Heart!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
"You ease back the night,
And my world is not so dark,"

I love the imagery of that line. the entire poem is wnderful

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Yep, I agree. Often it's the little things that make us fall in love with someone.
Wonderful write.
Love
S

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Rein,
So tender and loving
""Hey, hey..."
I hear you say...
"What?”
I reply,
Only to hear you say;
"I love you..."
And all I can do is smile
and whisper back;

"I love you too..." "
Beautiful
PJ

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Lovely and tender.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
gentle write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Awwww Retta,
What a precious write... :)

Trixie :)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
What a very toucning and beautiful poem. Wow! Someone is a very lucky guy. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
A very tender piece. Lovely.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Wonderful poem Reindeer.

Debashish

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Very sweet and romantic!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
a big poem about the little things...very sweet

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
A scene set by emotional magic. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Such gentle love found in your words. Another wonderful write Retta. Lisa


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