I've read this as dawn was breaking, waiting for the dancing of Eos in the Sun, Was this poem a dream? You left it to our imagination, that's for sure.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2009
You awaken
You think
In the moment
Before dawn comes of age
The sun a mere surreal hue
Behind dark hills in the east
You are on the edge
Balanced on a filament
Between darkness and light
Hell and heaven
These are great lines here Regis. Mastefully done!!!
Feelings FELT are real ... whether the rest is might be debatable. Would it matter? As long as one is content and it does no harm, let things rest in comfort :)!
Beautiful poem and art ... as always :).
:)Love,
Sandy
These are more like visions into our souls. There are lessons to be learned if we can decipher them..."seemingly seeks to split your soul"...they can be quite frightening! An excellent interpretation, Regis. The language is strung as tight as that filament.
"Was it really just a dream?" That's the question
right. Great piece!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Wow Regis This really is intense. Such a true poem of the real life we all live - Between two worlds ...seemingly seeks to split your soul -
Excellent!
Picture is almost as awesome as your poem could just stare at that for hours.
Thank You Regisxo
Tracey
Creative write that also, beyond dazzling imagery, emulates emotions of hope and amazement. Franz
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
Strong write powerful which makes you think aloud !!!
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
Hi Regis. I haven't forgotten you! Great piece as usual.
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
Such beautiful imagery.. you have a true talent for captivating your readers and making them question what is reality and what is their own imagination... great write,
~Kari Anne~
Regis..its always a joy to read you and learn from you....you fill your poems with deep emotions...this one is exceptional...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!!
Evocative. Regis, you hit upon something important with your topic here...we tend to let the reality of day mute our connection with nature and spirit.
Happy New Year to you!
Gina
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Filled with exceptional imagery and it’s a wonderful poem. Excellent work, Regis.
Heart-stopping and mind-splitting, Regis, I just love this poetic capture of a specific moment in time that miraculously recurs day after day! So often, we miss "the" moment and have hazy ideas that the dawn is a rising, sinuous colour-stream. But, as you so well imagise here, it is a sharp rending of light and dark asunder when that split-second moment happens. Thank you for reminding me again of this fantastic truth which I wish I was alert enough to seek out more often! This is strong and powerful and very well conceived. TY Kate xx
I love the imagery here, you must definitely dream in colors, although you have some wild dreams buddy...I like the title for this one, it seems to fit quite naturally...Ed & Rufuz
Don't we!!! So many times, I have awakened knowing it was, somehow, more than just a dream. Very nice, as always, when I visit your den, Regis.
Take care,
Sherry
I wonder if practically everything in my life is just a dream! ha ha!Sometimes I sure wish some of it was! :-) This is a beautiful, building piece that ends with a flourish...blessings and hugs to you Regis...Michelle
it is more than a dream, it is an awakening ... intensely beautiful and thought inspiring ...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
For me yes it would be a dream although some of them I have trouble with.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Oh, my, Regis... this builds to a vivid and moving crescendo! "balanced on a filament" is pure poetry, imaginative and accessible to the open mind... a marvelous piece that shimmers! katy xox.
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You think
In the moment
Before dawn comes of age
The sun a mere surreal hue
Behind dark hills in the east
You are on the edge
Balanced on a filament
Between darkness and light
Hell and heaven
These are great lines here Regis. Mastefully done!!!
Janet
Beautiful poem and art ... as always :).
:)Love,
Sandy
Felix
right. Great piece!
Excellent!
Picture is almost as awesome as your poem could just stare at that for hours.
Thank You Regisxo
Tracey
I love that line.
Beautiful masterpiece, as always, regis.
Love and peace, Huda
Between 2 Worlds Is Only That Great Divide Whence Where Upon You Get To Meet Me, TRASK & (God) Damned- My Out Of Control Little Children...
TRASK
~Kari Anne~
and the images you brought
enjoyed much!!!
Best regards,
Leland
Love Tinka
rainbow in a dewdrop, just before the sun moves away from it.
Happy New Year to you!
Gina
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Paix et amour a toi!
Sensational imagery my friend - the poetic depth in which you write is superlative!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Peace, Carole
Balanced on a filament
Between darkness and light
Hell and heaven
You tread
Between two worlds
The razor sharp strand
Seemingly seeks to split your soul"
Excellent imagery! And how many of us live this.... Great write, Regis....
In Spirit,
Bear
Take care,
Sherry
Love Eileen
nice presentation :)
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
your imagery just shines--and so does this write
BRAVO!
i particularly love
"...you are on the edge
balanced on a filament
between darkness and light
hell and heaven...." <--------magnificence!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)