Amélie I met Amélie
quite unexpectedly
She was introduced to me
in a kaleidoscope of colors
on the edge of the river of dreams
by another entity
quite a beauty
really
We sat leaning back
on the arc of a rainbow
As we watched
in timelessness
the stars began to fall
from the sky
Angels gathered them
flew away
leaving stardust in their wake
Amélie wept In the darkling blue-black backdrop
of endlessness
her crystal tears
became newborn stars
A moment ago
Amélie smiled
I wished we would never wake
I'd love for a dream to meet the man whom I could gaze into his eyes and feel real love again. if only that dream would come true! Someday - maybe!!!????
Quite a magical and emotional poetic story you have created. The imagery and the wording are beautiful. Loved every moment of this poem. Thank you for sharing.
I see that you were inspired by the movie "Amélie Poulain"... or maybe just a name, an atmosphere... One that is surreal, dreamlike floating.
We're left to wonder who the character is.
Lovely, beautiful, dreaming poetry with your allusions to angels and stars, Regis. This is such a great romantic poem, it places you with the masters...Jerry
Love this: "Angels gathered them / flew away / leaving stardust in their wake / Amélie wept / In the darkling blue-black backdrop /
of endlessness / her crystal tears / became newborn stars."
Woooow what an amazingly beautiful dream!!
your words captured beautiful imagery
and passion and tenderness!
Awesome piece!!
Peace Love and Light...hugssss too...Morning Star
This is a sweet surrendering dream of imaginative promises
how delightful the visuals I have...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You Regis
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
This is the kind of poetry that you should write, Regis, this really shows what your speciality is, as you are in touch with your spiritual side. Excellent work, my friend, peace to you, Michelle
You do a lot in your dreams... you really get around the astral universe. And one of the many fruits of that are poems so finely shaped as this one. It must be even more ravishing in French...
Later, michael guy
Reg, you write with such exquisite passion with both intensity and tenderness,your poems are always a pleasure to experience. I wonder how many ladies wish they were your Amelie;-)Thank you for sharing!
She was introduced to me
in a kaleidoscope of colors
on the edge of the river of dreams
Regis....there you go yet again my brother....you never cease to amaze me with your fantastic writes...keep them coming bro...great write...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
Beautifully described and so mysterious, Regis. A colourful collage indeed of feelings, sensings and emotions. A rollercoaster, too, taking us through the whole spectrum of happy/sad. Waking would be like putting a pin to this high-flying balloon, leaving us to have to decide whether we wake with sunshine or rain... xx
This is my favorite poem of yours, Reg. Partly because it doesn't always rhyme, and the dream is so far out. Was it a real dream you had? The movement forward with the stars is superb. I like "leaving stardust in their wake." Loved your writing style.
"to sleep, per chance to dream"? -- quite a lovely dream described in your lovely verbiage -- another great write from a wonderful poet -- peace to you my fear friend -- JMW
Reg, I am with my brother here, whatever you where drinking...will you share? it seems that a drunk muse is a better one that the sobers going around here.
Georg
"Amélie wept
In the darkling blue-black backdrop
of endlessness
her crystal tears
became newborn stars"
These are my favorite of all your beautiful lines in this spiritual/romantic composition. I love the metaphysical feel to the poem, overall. Lovely, indeed!
Oh how beautiful this is, Regis!! Is she a dream or a premonition? I am hoping for the latter. Dreamy perfection with excellent images.
Take care,
Sherry
This is why your poems get reviewed ... excellence. I am a bit envious. Well done, Regis, because you have found it and I am still searching for my voice ....
"Darkling blue-black backdrop," is an interesting phrase. Wished I'd thought of it. Breathlessly written; timelessly read. Quality verses here. Thanks Regis!
Timed exposure measured by the meteor of the heart...pulling the cable release of love's aperture...copied in the mind's eye developed in Kodachrome and framed selective (M)emory of the dark-haired woman...you met eons ago, Regis...illuminating!
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Be encouraged and keep on writing!
Much Love,
Margaret
You enchant me with your verses. I read this one five times. I am a day dreamer so I can really relate to this one.
Nicole
Beautiful poetry, I enjoyed the read.
All the best and take care.
~Gwendolyn
Love, Diana
Love TinkaSweets
We're left to wonder who the character is.
Axilea
of endlessness / her crystal tears / became newborn stars."
Magically visual. A wonderful write!
-Debra
your words captured beautiful imagery
and passion and tenderness!
Awesome piece!!
Peace Love and Light...hugssss too...Morning Star
how delightful the visuals I have...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You Regis
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Later, michael guy
Sandie Angel :o)
I love:
her crystal tears
became newborn stars
Beautiful imagery throughout but those are my favorite lines. A magical poem. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
what a warm introduction
nice writ
~Donna.
Thank you for sharing your cosmic thoughts.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Harold M. Nash
Love,
Eileen
in a kaleidoscope of colors
on the edge of the river of dreams
Regis....there you go yet again my brother....you never cease to amaze me with your fantastic writes...keep them coming bro...great write...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
Peace,
Kathy
Edwin
wonderful!
take care,
William
stay safe...
Love and Blessings to you Regis,
Christine
Tom
in a kaleidoscope of colors
on the edge of the river of dreams
Marvelous, my friend.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Georg
Gina
Take Care
Sam
ann
Always the best to you, my friend,
Jim
This poem has all the best qualities, fantasy, romance, spirituality, elegance of expression and a wonderful aftertaste and resonance.
John
In the darkling blue-black backdrop
of endlessness
her crystal tears
became newborn stars"
These are my favorite of all your beautiful lines in this spiritual/romantic composition. I love the metaphysical feel to the poem, overall. Lovely, indeed!
Take care,
Sherry
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rockie Coppolella
Love,
Sage
Peace,
Dan
Loved the image and the poem, especially:
"She was introduced to me
in a kaleidoscope of colors
on the edge of the river of dreams . . . "
Best regards,
Lance
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
in a kaleidoscope of colors
How lovely such a beautiful dream.
hugs xo
Kathy
Sounds like a beautiful dream
Cryssa