Thanks for the welcome! I'm working two jobs at the moment and am a little spacy. :)
I think it's sweet but if you used a bit more white rhyme and alliteration, you could break away from the hard rhyme and it'd have a more musical tone.
Although I dunno know if you want a more musical tone.
Hey Regis, what a darling offering! I'm sure she is SPECIAL.. because YOU surely are!
I don't get here often, and hardly to review.. but
The word Honeygirl is so rarely heard.. and precious, to me.
So I will share a little secret with you.. my mother called me that when I was young.. and then I called my own daughters that as they grew up - and now, it's 3rd generation, as I go on to call my GRANDdaughters Honeygirl! So you see, Honey Bee, this little gem, you have penned, has special meaning to me!
Thank you for the delightful blessing, Reg :)
Love & Hugs, Rhonda
PS> We think your profile photo is just great & Jason Michael says hello!
Regis, you have done it again.....beautifully written fron a compassionate heart of love ! What a powerful gift ! Thanks for
sharing and for caring ! Sorry I do not get here more often !
YOU'RE 'SWEET' ON HER AND I CAN UNDERSTAND WHY...HER BEING A 'HONEYGIRL', AND ALL(SMILE). A GREAT WORK OF RHYME, REGIS...VERY WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Sounds like someone to know & to know well...(sorry Regis, but this past week has been one of depression & pain in my life which made it hard to keep up to date with all those that I read & comment on regularly...ed)
What's with the "silly"??!! I ADORE this, Regis. It's endearing and honest and refreshingly "smitten", such that it brings out rhymes that sing with elation as well as dainty expression. I think Honeygirl is a delightful term that I've not heard before, so it's wonderful to hear it so beautifully described in full. Lovely work! xx
whimsy and ryhme is always so refreshing and uplifting...too much 'deep', political', 'love-lost'can drag spirits low...but then i'm the one who always dabbles in those things...then races back to my 'rose-colored' whimsy. i liked this 'muchly'...p
Regis, tasty rhyme filled with the lyrics of fine song and whimsy. You have mastered in art I fail miserably at with each attempt. Yes,the green is envy. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Your poem is as sweet as honey dripping from the hive. On a lighter note, keep in mind that honey is actually bee barf. ;)
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2011
So sweet Regis! Your title caught my eye ... That's my nickname family and close friends call me ... Your Honeygirl must be so delighted with this poem ... Wonderfully written!
You have described your honeygirl perfectly Regis. BTW I didn't find these verses silly at all. Love in all its forms is a wonderful thing, and if acting silly or writing silly poems is a part of that love, then so be it. I thought this poem was not only romantic but heartwarming as well. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much Love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie
This is just plain ole' sweet, Regis. Your honeygirl is lucky to have you as a friend and admirer... and for you to have her as a friend. Very nice, Regis.
Ahh, in these dark and scary times it is pure joy to see such sunshine, this has been a difficult day for me and you just made it so much brighter! Thanks
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Jane
Thanks for the welcome! I'm working two jobs at the moment and am a little spacy. :)
I think it's sweet but if you used a bit more white rhyme and alliteration, you could break away from the hard rhyme and it'd have a more musical tone.
Although I dunno know if you want a more musical tone.
:) LOL.
Anyway, it is exceptionally cute. :)
Tirz
hug
kathi
Chip Bergeron
I don't get here often, and hardly to review.. but
The word Honeygirl is so rarely heard.. and precious, to me.
So I will share a little secret with you.. my mother called me that when I was young.. and then I called my own daughters that as they grew up - and now, it's 3rd generation, as I go on to call my GRANDdaughters Honeygirl! So you see, Honey Bee, this little gem, you have penned, has special meaning to me!
Thank you for the delightful blessing, Reg :)
Love & Hugs, Rhonda
PS> We think your profile photo is just great & Jason Michael says hello!
sharing and for caring ! Sorry I do not get here more often !
Blessings,
Margaret
enjoyed reading very much
Now where can I get one of those "Honeygirls"
Peace be with you
William
Daniel
Lovely tribute to a lovely woman. I saw her picture and wish you happiness.
Hugs, Micki
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Anna
~Morgan
Flow is very important in poetry and for me it has to be 100% perfect otherwise it can ruin the read.
Lena
Take care,
Sherry
a labor of your love flowing
~Regis~
Your Honeygirl to be deserving
of such succulent sweetness from You
Lady Vivian
Becca
Ron
Blessings,
Christine
May the Lord Jesus bless you and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much Love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie
Peace
Tony
Your affection for her is touching.
Great write.
Joy L. Hale
Sheila
false world, Regis, this ode lifts my spirit
this morning.
Thank you.
John