AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  H.G. Potter, iDavid Young, iLloydene Hill, iScott Zachary, iEmmanuel Laroche, iMargaret Mullings, iDavid Schwinghammer, iMichael Gorton, iLisa Loucks Christenson, iTichaona Chinyelu, i

  Home > War > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Steve E Ralph

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· Messages
· 225 Titles
· 928 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Steve E Ralph, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



The Surgeons Tears
by Steve E Ralph → (All Poetry by Steve E Ralph)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He wouldn’t last another day,

Such were his mortal wounds,

And there was nothing we could do but pray,

His pain would finish soon,

 

But when he asked me, “Am I dying Doc?”,

I smiled at him and lied,

“Hell, it’s just a flesh wound son”,

But as I spoke those words he died,

 

And as he took his final breath,

A teardrop left my eye

Somehow this one got to me,

Though I couldn’t tell you why,

 

He was just another soldier,

That had fallen to the guns,

I didn’t know him personally,

He was just somebody’s son,

 

That had tried to make a difference,

And put the world at piece,

Well maybe not the whole world,

But this part of it at least,

 

This dusty barren landscape,

That’s seen more blood than rain,

This final resting place of those,

Who sought to make a change,

 

And in doing so had given more,

Than we had the right to ask,

So many names remembered,

In their local epitaphs,

 

So many flag draped caskets,

And families to weep,

Those twenty-one gun volleys,

For those heroes now asleep,

 

And I’ve seen so many like them,

I thought my heart had turned to stone,

From years of fixing bullet holes,

Torn flesh and broken bones,

 

In battlefield conditions,

Amidst the cries of pain and fear,

I force another practiced smile,

That must hide the surgeon’s tears.

 

By S.E.Ralph

 

6-8-2008


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Surgeons Tears"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on October 28, 2011
"And as he took his final breath, A teardrop left my eye Somehow this one got to me, Though I couldn’t tell you why" ... perhaps because this soldier's passing represents all those who had gone before him and all those who still fight but that we hope will survive. This is truly a moving piece, so appropriate to our time and broken hearts. A very poignant poem, well done. ~Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
So sad a write, but must be read and commented on. Good soldiers are dying fast, much too fast. We must pray for their souls and families left behind. You are such a good hearted person. Always, Lois

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Oh my oh my oh my....wow...only you can do this ,you tug my heart strings with your amazing unique and soul-wrenching poetry...I loved this one,absolutely loved it!!!
Sincerely
from
your fan and pal
Kay.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
So solemn yet true to its core. The situations faced are never easy and the memories linger on, well written...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Steve, this is absolutely heartbreaking... I have missed your work so much.. I wrote this when you left YPDC..

GONE, BUT NOT FORGOTTEN:

My all-time favourite poet is gone
He’s disappeared into thin air.
I don’t know where he’s posting now
I sure wish he was still here.

He wrote about wars
He wrote about love
He wrote about everything
Under the stars above.

He wrote with such pride
He wrote with such passion
His words held me captive,
With their own style and fashion.

This poet was so special to me.
His poems moved me to tears
They will forever be remembered
By me, throughout the years.

Wherever you are today,
I hope that you will know
My undying love and admiration
Upon you I bestow.

09.12.04

Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Oh, this is powerful: stunning tribute to those who've given their all and the medics charged with their care - as the daughter of, siter of, niece of, cousin of Veterans, as well as a Veteran (a medic), myself, this touched deep and let my own tears fall - thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Sighhhh,I can relate to a surgeon's tears..very well written enjoyed...Hugssss..have a wonderful and safe day


New Poetry by Steve E Ralph
Popular Poetry (War)
  1.  No Longer Alone In This Empty Place
  2.  I See Yesterday
  3.  Genocide
  4.  View from an Ice Balloon
  5.  Why Did I Laugh Yesterday
  6.  Thank You For Your Service Vent
  7.  Twelve Hours in a Foxhole
  8.  Through The Confederate Cemetery Gates
  9.  Refugees
  10.  America, The Great
  11.  This Place
  12.  Where is the Peace on Earth?
  13.  escaping destructions throat...
  14.  that morning along the mezzanine...
  15.  My Apologies
  16.  America in Crisis
  17.  Veterans
  18.  Remembering Our Fighter Pilots
  19.  In Flanders Fields
  20.  I am Sick of it!
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!