A reflection of the beautiful orange sunset this evening......
Leaves rustle in wind
Sun's final breath as it sets
Waiting 'til next rising.........
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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
An honest-to-goodness haiku, and a nice one at that. Sorry I am just now commenting on it, you wrote it Friday, I got notification tonight just before I retired.
You ought to have seen the recent spectacular sunsets we have had here in Texas; nothing short of breathtaking! Wonderful haiku; you have captured a sunset in all its magnificent glory! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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You ought to have seen the recent spectacular sunsets we have had here in Texas; nothing short of breathtaking! Wonderful haiku; you have captured a sunset in all its magnificent glory! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D