Poignant Ramblings written in blood (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Poignant Ramblings written in blood
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley → (All Poetry by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley)
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For the emotional vampire shall drain you of your vitality, through learning your needs where you believe it is love, and takes your energy only to replace with agony ~Lily of Lough Neagh~

Poignant Ramblings written in blood She lured me in, those eyes Hypnotizing pulling me deep I was powerless to her hold For naught known the fatal wound Inflicted upon my soul Cutting more deeply than a blade Consuming all the vitality of my soul For it was surely subtle Her poignant ramblings written in blood Captured me to what was naught truth For this curse so inflicted upon my soul I desired, lusted for, craved so consumed I wanted this fire, this fire that drew me Unto the depths of love, only hell resides For she becomes the succubus of eternal hell My demon of the night that possesses my soul Will this nightmare ever end… Can I be loosed from this grip… For now I am filled with hatred, For naught only myself, but her She fills with hate for she is an animal There are no longer human remains I struggle for my own strength As she has pulled it away from me Asphyxiating desire to run Fear of becoming as she For which is her only goal To turn so many unto slavery Her puppets to do her bidding For she is the needed drug Despair fills me, overcomes me Is there no hope of survival But I hide my wounds Pray for another day That I go unnoticed in my agony Carolee Dennis-Woosley July 14, 2012

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 14, 2014

Truly compelling, Carol; your verses and what they express bring chills to my soul. Very effective and to me, this can apply to other "real" situations as well. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2012

Even the thought of this is frightening! No-one should be under this type of control

Di

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

I think you have captured a very powerful force here in the way you wrote the words you chose. Evisceratingly conveyed, and ending in the silent scream. Strong piece! ~~ DIana

Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2012

Oh a vampire those always frightened me, but I understand what you say here. A loveless relationship

Edith

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

So very daunting would be the
power of another over one's soul
*Carolee* and you have captured
it so very well....

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

I will understand this as a relationship without love and none in return. Only one which holds a terrible addiction

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Quite powerful, and quite horrific.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 14, 2012

When addicted to something or someone nothing else matters.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Oh yeah addictions are powerful! And not a good one if your in a bad relationship!

Mark

Reviewed by Shirley Houston

Whew! How powerful the drug of addiction of obsessive love for the vampire that is both hated & lusted for..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Yes the energy vampires are out there with their smiles as they listen to the way to drain you. But you can remove them just by becoming aware that this is their true nature....and remember yours!

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Carolee, Finally we are getting are just rain today...and so rain always seems to fit with in with 'vampires'. Again, your words hold their truths! Thanks!

Deborah

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

You are able to write in so many styles. No matter the subject or the style, everything appeals to the imagination, touches the heart and the soul and is so recognizable for many of us.

You're a great writer Carolee

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Like Jerry i liked that movie. The pour soul you describe would need a powerful angel to rescue him if he is to escape for it sounds like the vampire has sucked all his strength.
You have written an intriquing tale perfectly a real keeper.
Budd

Reviewed by Ed J.

Sounds like you knew some of the women in my past relationships. Wonderful but un-nerving write.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Oh boy, I LOVED that moved the photo is from, I must have seen it four or five times, and that is unusual for me.

Your poem captures the fear within Cage's character completely. Damn! Makes me want to run out and rent the darn movie. Yes, her only goal was to enslave and drain blood when the desire struck her. Loved this poem, it will go into my library.