Stepping stones in a rushing mountain babbling brook, sings as it passes woodland beast and birds in trees songs of where the waters of life have been A capella of where the waters seek to be delicato is natures instrumental touch in eddy pools
Filtered rays from the trees above add harmony golden lights dances to the waters calypso beat the cadence never ending, everlastingly renewed silver trout glisten in time to an orchestrated brook score a mantra so reverent, cathedral choirs would weep
was banging about in here and ran across this...the title captured me, as it is a term rarely used these days...what a delightful find this is! This is well crafted and simply beautiful.
Cheryl the imagery is exceptionally beautiful in this superb poem!A joy to read!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2003
Whenever I read your lovely poetry it makes me want to be able to write the same way. Since I don't believe I will ever get to that plane in my life's progression, I'll just have to be content to read your words and marvel. Thing is. I never, ever GET it with the first reading. It takes me a few readings to "feel" what you wrote and then, after that, I "feel" quite nice about myself and the order of the world.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2003
I've seen it but I'm not sure I've ever seen it written quite so beautifully.. Cheryl, your alliteration is priceless and perfect here. How lovely to be immersed in a reading.. you've calmed my thoughts. Thank you. katy.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
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EXCELLENT WRITE
WILLIAM
Antoinette
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~Joseph
a mantra so reverent, cathedral choirs would weep'
Wonderful words, Cheryl. Enjoyed!