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Sun's Slow Bake
by Danae Wilkin → (All Poetry by Danae Wilkin)
Monday, April 9, 2018    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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As I slow bake the dawn scrapers,

Comes the rise of shame desiccated.

The priests sacrifice another virgin

Else I shine no more.

 

I laugh stoically,

Cast shadows over rural crop circles,

For who else

Would make up these narratives?

 

Maybe I am a god,

So many have worshipped me.

Making the food grow,

The trees of purifying air,

The storms of rain and wind.

 

Your canyons of melted sand and iron

I smile upon

And asphalt photic ooze

Dipped from the base of oceans.


I wink to rise my waves,

Blurring the line between

Make believe and the long harsh truth,

Beaming of dial’s shadow.


The memories from which you violently shake,

As my descent leaves you helpless,

Closing eyes and waiting for that morning

I rise again

And cleanse your temples, your bodies

From all that was once taken.

 

I burn the wicked and heal the wounded,

Lest you forget

My mercy,

My hope,

My love.

 


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 Reviews of "Sun's Slow Bake"
Reviewed on April 14, 2018
forgive and forget the betrayal. . . till today the humanity cannot give an answer to this problem, including you and me. your mercy, your hope, your love are only yours. . . you cover the others with them and if without an expected respond, well, that's not your problem but that of them, as they are different people in different cases. Methinks the key word here is SLOW. We all will fail because of high speed we try to adopt calling it 'the modern progression.' Yes, but it is not healthy, at least ;)) Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 10, 2018
I really like the way you wrote this from the viewpoint of the sun. The sun is our source of life, whether we like it or not. And you covered all the bases.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on April 10, 2018
Old Sol wears golden robes, and your poem did justice to her.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 10, 2018
This is a very thoughtful and powerful statement not only of the importance of the sun to our existence, but of the interconnectedness of the good, the thoughtful, and the beautiful--the basic elements of philosophy. I marvel at the way you have made me think about issues of life in very kind and moving ways. "I wink to rise my waves, blurring the line between make believe and the long harsh truth, beaming of dial's shadow" is poetry many strive to achieve, but few ever reach. This composition is worthy of an honored place in the museum of life. Thank you for this treasure, Danae.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on April 9, 2018
As your poem asks us to consider the duality of this life-giving star, to accept it’s worship-prone followers of old, and even today in parts of the world where ancient societal thinking still prevails, we are left to never doubt the power and life-sustaining gift we so often take for granted. Thank you for the reminder.


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