Autumn Weekend (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Autumn Weekend
by John T Banasiewicz Jr → (All Poetry by John T Banasiewicz Jr)
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well thought this be a good one to post as I try to get back to the den and writing here after a few months off
Crisp north breeze sweeping across the lake Twisting thru the oak trees Gray misty sky she sees today Pregnant clouds hanging carelessly overhead Nature changing before her eyes Trees becoming naked Golden leafs falling to the ground Forming a rainbow color bed for animals to lie upon Buffalo grazing lazily in the fields still lush and green Elk roaming deeper into the woods going into their rut Squirrels hunting, finding, and hiding their nuts Geese flying south no time to stop Summer�s maiden knows it is time for her to rest As she sees fall�s grander in full glory Putting her in a peaceful and resting state Autumn weekend her final resting place John T Banasiewicz Jr Copyright 2004

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2004

Welcome back Tommy.
Good to read you again.
I am actually more the summer type, but was deeply touched by your beautiful autumn write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 22, 2004

A very nice rendition of this wonderful season, John. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Summer is still doing its thing down here in the swamps, we had record-breaking temperatures yesterday and today. Down here the fall is a misnomer. :oved the poem.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Beautiful poetry miss your poems.

LP

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

A beautiful tribute to a lovely time of year - truly appreciated by those of us in Florida this year to be certain!

Welcome back my dear friend!

Peace,

~Rose~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Love the flow of nature in this one. Great write.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Beautiful. Graceful imagery. Playfully creative piece.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Your autumn weekend paints a marvelous poetic picture, Tommy.

Welcome Back!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Welcome Back!!

Very nice write John!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Welcome back!
Fall is my favorite time of the year..the bright and vibrant colors, the cooling of the air..though a bit sad to know that the green will be gone for a bit, it's still a beautiful season.
Glad to have you home!

Lisa

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Love the seasonal imagery John! Beautifully written!
Good to see you back!;-)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

very nice seasonal write

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Good description of the crisp north breeze, could feel nature's season..

Amy