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SMALL PAIN IN MY CHEST
by Barbara Sue → (All Poetry by Barbara Sue)
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war affects everyone..

About the Poem:

At times we may forget that soldiers are just people like everyone else. They laugh, they cry, they have sweethearts and mothers, birthdays and favorite cars - and they die.

Sometimes when we are celebrating victories we forget about those who made it possible, those who gave the ultimate sacrifice for their country.....

I HAVE READ THIS POEM SEVERAL TIMES AND
KEEP COMING BACK TO IT..I THINK THAT
THIS IS ONE I WANT TO SHARE WITH YOU...

Small Pain In My Chest
by Michael Mack

The soldier boy was sitting calmly underneath that tree.
As I approached it, I could see him beckoning to me.
The battle had been long and hard and lasted through the night
And scores of figures on the ground lay still by morning's light.

"I wonder if you'd help me, sir", he smiled as best he could.
"A sip of water on this morn would surely do me good.
We fought all day and fought all night with scarcely any rest -
A sip of water for I have a small pain in my chest."

As I looked at him, I could see the large stain on his shirt
All reddish-brown from his warm blood mixed in with Asian dirt.
"Not much", said he. "I count myself more lucky than the rest.
They're all gone while I just have a small pain in my chest."

"Must be fatigue", he weakly smiled. "I must be getting old.
I see the sun is shining bright and yet I'm feeling cold.
We climbed the hill, two hundred strong, but as we cleared the crest,
The night exploded and I felt this small pain in my chest."

"I looked around to get some aid - the only things I found
Were big, deep craters in the earth - bodies on the ground.
I kept on firing at them, sir. I tried to do my best,
But finally sat down with this small pain in my chest."

"I'm grateful, sir", he whispered, as I handed my canteen
And smiled a smile that was, I think, the brightest that I've seen.
"Seems silly that a man my size so full of vim and zest,
Could find himself defeated by a small pain in his chest."

"What would my wife be thinking of her man so strong and grown,
If she could see me sitting here, too weak to stand alone?
Could my mother have imagined, as she held me to her breast,
That I'd be sitting HERE one day with this pain in my chest?"

"Can it be getting dark so soon?" He winced up at the sun.
"It's growing dim and I thought that the day had just begun.
I think, before I travel on, I'll get a little rest ..........
And, quietly, the boy died from that small pain in his chest.

I don't recall what happened then. I think I must have cried;
I put my arms around him and I pulled him to my side
And, as I held him to me, I could feel our wounds were pressed
The large one in my heart against the small one in his chest


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 Reviews of "SMALL PAIN IN MY CHEST"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
Oh my Barbara, this offering has touched the depths of my heart and soul! Tears sting my eyes from the powerful imagery, touching voice, and overall sincerity of the selection! This write should be read by all, those whom take our soldiers for granted, who do not see them as human beings who eat, breath, love, and feel. Profound my dear friend, lingers on one's thoughts...touching indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Powerful, Barbara Sue. Well done, and God bless the troops!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

*check 'NY' in title: think you mean 'My' :)*


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