I sure like your style of writing, Jeannette. You take me on such wonderful trips. None so much as your great novel When Justice is Served. Yet my favorite of this piece is this--
"Feeling my feathers ruffled softly
Like the tickle of a sneeze."
Had to stop right then and rub my nose.
Yes, I enjoyed this one.
Very neat work, Jeanette... that twist at the end was wry and acute! A beautiful and airy response to George's poem. I love the feel of transportation and musing that comes with it. TY Kate xx
I love this write Jeanette, I too have often thought of being a graceful bird flying high in the sky...I posted a poem a couple of monthes ago titled Wings...expressing my desires about flying...it wouls be nice sometimes to be able to carelessly fly from place to place...I used to dream of flying when I was a little girl...I can remember waking up and thinking...shoot, it was only a dream! Enjoyed this my friend, full of imagery and rich and warm words...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
I love the poem it was beautiful and rich in imagery. The part that got me most was the last verse. I find it funny that all controversy with using God's Name in relation to the country is always debated except in time of peril and tragedy. I like to think them both one and the same. Wonderful write.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
Have always wished I could fly like an eagle. I simply adore this style of writing. love Holly
Ah, me too, Jeanette! And if those ants down there would ever get their heads outta their (BEEPs), our flying might be in friendly skies. We will keep wishing/hoping/praying/pushing! Good poem!
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May God bless you richly with success!
Sandie May Angel :o)
"I Wish I Were An Eagle"
Beautiful, what a wonderful inspiration Jeanette.
I could feel the strength and character shining through in this write.
Loved it!
From the Heart...
ps...I would also be proud and happy to be an eagle...might I add, smile!
"Feeling my feathers ruffled softly
Like the tickle of a sneeze."
Had to stop right then and rub my nose.
Yes, I enjoyed this one.
Your loving friend,
Richard
I stamp it on the back of everything I mail!
There are other ways to carry our tablets from that burning bush!
This is a wonderful write, very patriotic and very spiritually upholding!
Thanks for stopping by my den~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
I love the poem it was beautiful and rich in imagery. The part that got me most was the last verse. I find it funny that all controversy with using God's Name in relation to the country is always debated except in time of peril and tragedy. I like to think them both one and the same. Wonderful write.
Ted
A beautiful composition with sensitive and profound subjects dealt.
I did enjoy reading this writing of poetic excellence.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU