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Hell
by Jansen Estrup → (All Poetry by Jansen Estrup)
Friday, October 23, 2015    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A strange weather phenom

HELL
by

JANSEN ESTRUP

Koppu laid twenty inches of rain on a mountain land, a category 4 jab with the left hand.
The other side, a savage right, Patricia's 200 plus winds slammed another craggy height.
Pray save us from the Christmas Chil'r'n, who come early to visit at Hallows Ev'n.
Show our backs to the drought foresaker, let us die of La Nina, O, deadly hot sere desert maker.

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 Reviews of "Hell"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 18, 2018
An interesting "take" on storms, Jansen; and these words of yours are ever apt and timely. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 22, 2017

Interesting take on storms


never stop writing!

m

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 2, 2015
Truly, Jansen, a most frightening, and peculiar, storm. The problems in the ocean, and atmosphere, now, must be far-reaching to generate such a beast, and the fact it diffused so quickly upon landfall is certainly curious. If I dwell too long on it I might see a 'spiritual metaphor' in it. Blessings... rlc

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on October 26, 2015
Patricia was a monster storm but Christ Jesus the Lord still quits storms! Alleluia!!! Your poem should teach us how precious and fragile life it, thank you, peace!!!

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 24, 2015
Perhaps the tired, the poor, the huddled masses yearning to breathe free,and the wretched refuse all gather along wind whipped shores, the parched lands, and flooded river valleys because they know Mother Nature’s treatment is kinder to them than is that of their human oppressors.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 23, 2015
Looks like the desert Southwest is in for some gloomy spooky nights of heavy rain and potential flash floods disrupting house and home too close to riverbeds.

Even us over here in subdued bayou land with haunted swamps turned to concrete ditches may be in for it this Hell o'ween with 1 to 2 feet of the watery grave.

Timely poem.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 23, 2015
You've reminded us with lyrical charm that even the most devilish of Nature's wrath deserves respect. Hopefully, any and all who'll not have this as a wake up call will pay attention along that coast.

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Reviewed on October 23, 2015
Yep, the old song applies -- the left is made of iron and the right is made of steel; if the left don't getcha then the right one weel. Hell to pay either way.


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