A rhyming acrostic that came to me when I awoke in midst of night. Since I could not get back to sleep, I made use of the time as I thought about friendship.
Friendship (Rhyming Acrostic)
Fledgling affection becomes love Respectfulness fits like a glove Intimacy is a treasure Empathy becomes the measure Never judging ever caring Devotedly ever sharing See these two friends walk hand in hand Happy footprints across the sand If such a treasure can be found Perhaps it's having me around
As always, Regis, you deliver beautiful, thoughtful treats for our eyes. I think you write this way because you yoursel are a very special friend for anyone to have. Blessings and peace,
Love this! short and to the point. Yes friendship is all about companionship, respect and affection. Just because 2 friends fight on principle, it is the loss of companionship that will draw them back together. Thanks!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2011
You are a pure treasure sweet man..excellent writing as always..Hugsss...much love to you
Excellent rhyming acrostic!! To have friends we have to be a friend. Never judge, empathetic, and devoted always! You were my first friend here at the Den. Supportive, and loving while I was trying to fit in. Thank you!! Your friend, ~Chessly
First thing that I noticed as I looked at this poem was that the first letter (F) of the first line was smaller in size than the rest of the letters. The AD editor must have screwed it up I assume.
The poem itself is good though the flow is not perfect in my opinion.
Beautifully done, Reg...as usual. Friendship can't have a more wonderful meaning than what you've just shared...Thank you for writing this lovely piece.
IF ONLY...IF ONLY...! BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS, OF A BEAUTIFUL THING; FRIENDSHIP WITHOUT ANY HANGUPS OR BOUNDARIES - JUST THE INTIMACY OF LOVE AND RESPECT, UNHAMPERED BY THE 'STAIN' OF MISTRUST AND JUDGMENTS. IF ONLY...IF ONLY! THANKS FOR SHARING, REGIS. A STRONG MESSAGE WITH A PERFECT 'GOAL' FOR MANY OF US. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2011
amazing the brilliance which strikes in those small hours of the night. i hope you're well regis. happy new year!!
... indeed it IS having you around, dear Regis! I cannot remember having read such an on-point, interesting and unique account of the treasure that true friendship really is and yes, kind Sir, you qualify mightily for the role. Some most beautiful, elegant and touching images here. Bless you, xx
You are a treasure Regis
you were the first person to
visit me here at AD
and I will never forget your
welcoming, and all those postings
and your reviews :)
and there's more of course
through the years :) xo
Love Always
Vickie
Regis, you have managed to rout out all of the emotions and unconditional aspects that summarize a friendship. This is right on my dear friend. Thanks for sharing it with me. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
HAPPY TURKEY WEEK!
Peace, love, and blessings,
John Michael
Regis you are the master of beautiful rhyming poetry....
Stephen
I've never tried doing an acrostic, but this one is
pure pleasure to read! Enjoyed very much
Thanks!
-ZACH
Steve
I love Rhythmic poems. You did well but it is to short. You could
longgate the poem to bring in your thoughts. Darryl Ehlers
Joy L. Hale
Keith
Friendship a treasure I found. Wonderful write Regis.
Lady Mary Ann
hug
Ksy
Awesome job here Regis.
Awesome.
John
love,
gina
Thanks for your lovely writings, and for all of your kind reviews.
Steph
God bless you. Kathy
The poem itself is good though the flow is not perfect in my opinion.
Lena
Lena
Very clever Regis, and very meaningful.
rege
Love and hugs,
Sheri
to this old beachcomer. Thanks, my friend. -gene.
Always a joy to read
db
For friends in need.
Anna
I would have aworn I commented in this cute crossward poem but I don't see it. Anyway, I really enjoyed it as usual.
Micki
Take care,
Sherry
kenny
WELL DONE! TK.
Ron
you were the first person to
visit me here at AD
and I will never forget your
welcoming, and all those postings
and your reviews :)
and there's more of course
through the years :) xo
Love Always
Vickie
Enjoyed much
Peace be with you
William
Daniel
AM
saved it to my lib1rary. Love ya!
Becca
Love,
Eileen
Chip Bergeron
Peace,
Dayvid
Read My Poem On What True Friend(ship) Really Is...
Credit For Romantic Tinge!
TRASk
This is such a wonderful poem about friendship. Finding true friendship is like finding gold.
Love the way you wrote this.
Hugs, Mary
Excellent
Good-Natured
Incredible
Sweet!
You are all this and more! Wonderful write, mon ami!
(((HUGS)) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Be always safe,
Karen
George
God bless,
Lew
fee
Peace and Love
Tony
Blessings,
Christine
Cheers,
Dan
Sheila