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The Teddy Bear (responding to dreamweavers challenge)
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I’m not the man that I was when this day began I’ll try to explain but I’m not sure I can I looked up to the sky while I was walking downtown And I saw a big white teddy bear looking down It just cant be real this thing that I see It is made out of clouds and its looking at me! I broke out in sweat as I stood in that place As the bear just looked down with a smile on his face Am I losing my mind? Can this really be? I’ll find someone to ask if they too can see Before anyone else could see this display The big teddy bear had just drifted away I got home from a day that had just changed my life And I started to share this big bear with my wife But as I hung up my coat, and put my hat on the shelf I decided its best to keep this bear to myself Jack Roberts - Nov 18 2002

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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2002

I like this one, Jack...but agree it's best to keep it to yourself ~ unless you had a camera to verify it! Great write.

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on November 19, 2002

I've seen many things that I wouldn't tell anyone about of course they weren't all in the sky either. Don't see as many anymore since I quit drinking twenty years ago. I'm not suggesting you were under the influence and there's nothing wrong with having an active imagination. It makes for some of the best poetry as this one shows. - Vic

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

Jack, you done this with great ease. And done it well. But I like you,,would keep these teddy bear clouds to myself,,it would be kinda hard to explain,,,great write,,Lisa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

great response, jack! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) p.s.: check out my version of the challenge!! :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

Great response, my friend.
You have a great
imagination and talent.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

Fun response, Jack. Well done.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

Great write Jack... well done!!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

This was wonderful Jack...Yes if you had told her about the bear she might think you were "looney tunes"..lol

Nature always has the best suprises. Ty, Danielle

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

This is wonderful, I love it.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2002

hhahaha yes, just give her a big bear hug instead.
Lovely, just lovely!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 17, 2002

Great response to the challenge Jack...really imaginative;-)

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2002

LOL... Thanks Jack.. for taking up the Picture Challenge. This is great. On that note.. I best head off to bed. Thanks for the much needed smile.
Namaste'
Melanie

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