Demons (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

AuthorsDen.com Join | Login

Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS AUTHORS BOOKS SAMPLE CHAPTERS AUDIOBOOKS eBOOKS STORIES ARTICLES POETRY BLOGS NEWS VIDEOS SUCCESS TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors: Gracie McKeever, iDebra Kraft, iJames Hill, iM. R. Mathias, iEmily Karlewicz, iMatt Miller, iWilliam Martell, iTeresa Walker, iTracey Morait, iRobert Wood, i

Home > Humor > Poetry Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Patrick A Granfors

Follow Me

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog

· 555 Titles
· 6,316 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
· Member Since: May, 2009

Patrick A Granfors, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Demons
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
Rated "G" by the Author.

Save

Follow Share on Facebook

Wasn't sure how to catagorize this one...I call it dark humor. Purely fiction.

Demons My demons got the upper hand Again Crafty bastards See in the dark Smell blood in the water In the air Hear a pin drop at a thousand paces That sound of deep despair Inaudible to mere mortals I spoke to God about it He chuckled Then told me to mind my own business I tried to explain My time card keeps getting stuck In the punch clock He just rolled his eyes And released the card From the clock’s grip As the floor became ooze The air thick with the screams Of demons My demons My screams Inaudible to mere mortals Angels playing name that tune Got it in just three notes God pulls out his ear buds and says Got it in two Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

Want to review or comment on this poem?

Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviews of "Demons"

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

Kool writing, my friend! Enjoyed.........

Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 23, 2011

well written piece!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 23, 2011

My kind of Halloween. Now this one, I love. You are playing with several ideas here that give me great visualizations of improbable horror.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

That is indeed a dark "curve ball," Patrick. Thanks for sharing your mind journeys. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Like Georg often said, God cheats at chess, why would he let you off to win, I would have checked those earplugs, I betcha they were fake, darn HE has got a big ego hm. Happy Easter Patrick!Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Patrick, I don't know where your mind has been, but it's good that you take it out and shake out the cobwebs every so often. I'd hate to imagine the things that would come creeping out of there if you didn't do that every once in a while. You had me sitting up and taking notice on this one buddy.

Well done�. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

you are witty and wonderful Patrick,whatever you write,methinks we all share some of your demons...

Happy Easter,
Eileen

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Mere mortal lives by the billions, probably does get a little repetitive watching humans make the same mistakes over and over and over. Nice change of pace.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

I like the idea of a God with a sense of humor...perhaps a litle TOO playful with his creation, but at least He can chuckle.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Doesn't seem dark to me, as weird as usual, but definitely not dark...e

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Incredibly creative with clever bits of controlled irony ~
Happy Easter!
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Clever and worth a laugh

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Great write, Patrick.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

awesome poem patrick!! another one fit to publish!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 22, 2011

Well- pretty cool dark thoughts.
John

New Poetry by Patrick A Granfors

No city lights mean stars to see. This makes me smile. Photo: Really crappy photo of the deer

Ozark Evening

Farewell John McCain

Stairway to Heaven

Pure fiction that evolved while listening to a Jimmy Buffett tune in my pickup on my way into town for an errand. Photo: By Patri

Standard Issue

This keyhole rock formation marks the entrance to �Buttermilk Springs�, a little cove containing a seasonal waterfall and a cave now submerged. The Oz

Buttermilk Springs

Many varieties are here in the woods right off the deck. Photo: By Patrick Granfors

Chasing Backyard Butterflies

Country Lyrics for mending a Broken Heart.

Queen of Broken Hearts

Relief at last cheap gas in Missouri Photo:Patrick Granfors

Somebody Blinked

Bend

Popular Poetry (Humor)

1.	Little Folk, Cousins Make A Pit Stop
2.	If I Could Be A Super Hero
3.	Fried Chicken
4.	An Adventurous Reinterpretation of Mid
5.	Like Ducks in Paper Trousers
6.	Laughing As I Flee...
7.	A Salt and Batter
8.	Amazing Grapes
9.	Newfangled Things
10.	Milkman's letter
11.	A Writer Named Ron
12.	Ode to Spamophobia
13.	The Last Second
14.	Porky Pig And Daffy Duck
15.	My First Heart Attack
16.	Houston Greats
17.	Atlanta Belle
18.	Burst Forth
19.	Flocking
20.	Bad Boy

Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Homer's Ill Iliad and Odd Sea Odyssey by Jay Dubya

Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.

Member BookAds

Bayou Valentine by Riley Blake

Fortune Redding faces her fears in an unlikely situation and barely escapes with her life.

Member BookAds

Shakespeare: Slammed, Smeared, Savaged and Slaughtered by Jay Dubya

Shakespeare: Slammed, Smeared, Savaged and Slaughtered (Part I) is adult literature featuring adult content and language.

Member BookAds