Absolutely beautiful I have to
Tell you I love the way you
Display this stunning write
love the tenderness of your words
and the unique form
Excellent tribute to the Freedom in Africa!
Love And Peace To you always
your friend....Morning Star
HLy Shit/Shoot- Sis!
This is truly eXCellent!
Tribute to FREEDOM in AFrica!
REign FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as Free as the Eagle takes thee'
Love your heart my friend!
Great poem and structure !
I love the ocean imagery here!
Waves, like those escaping from the human's mind to run over the lies that are like rocky shores being pounded by more waves.
Waves are free, lies are anchored with their own unreason.
Georg
This is a beautiful tribute to a country full of sadness and smiles. I watched the children's faces of Africa on American Idol last night. They raised $60,000,000 for children all over this world. Thank you for this tender pen.
Love,
Susan
You paint a full frame for each line, syllable, and even letter that moves the reader suspensefully from one moment to the next. A powerfully absorbing poem that was truly splendid to read.
Aberjhani
Blimey, Tinks... This is a case in point where the form punches through the point as much as the words... which seem all the more poignant and powerful for their sparseness. You picked a marvellous visual to match. Surging and passionate, thank you. Kate xx
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love and peace,
Carole~
to read such beautiful thoughts
Love * Peace
William
Tell you I love the way you
Display this stunning write
love the tenderness of your words
and the unique form
Excellent tribute to the Freedom in Africa!
Love And Peace To you always
your friend....Morning Star
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Chrissy
TRASK
This is truly eXCellent!
Tribute to FREEDOM in AFrica!
REign FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as Free as the Eagle takes thee'
Love your heart my friend!
Great poem and structure !
I love the ocean imagery here!
PEACE! and WArmest HuGs, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
bill
Waves are free, lies are anchored with their own unreason.
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
Loved it all...
x0x0x
Love,
Susan
splendid poem haunts the senses Tinka!
Happy Freedom Day!
Love,
Eileen
(((HUGS)))and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Amidst all the pain and despair expressed, you still fill it with a special kind of grace, Tinka!
I loved it!
And you :) Hugs, Rhonda
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Aberjhani