The night times knows me best
When dark and cold…
Like my emotions at late
The gentle moon caresses my face
And my tears…
Are like scattered pearls of dew
With flames licking within my heart
That leaves me in a emotional turmoil
With flames that burn my soul
The expression on my face is cold
My inner thoughts are dark
When the pearls of dew turns hard
My heart dies…
And leave me
Within this emotional turmoil
I do not hate… I just don’t feel
The gentle caress of the moon upon my face
I am dead within my soul
My soul of good turned bad
Without you my mate of soul
And nothing seems to matter
As I turn around and walk away
And the moonlights caress is gone
And the scattered pearls of dew
Becomes another emotional teardrop
Of Silence
Truly nice work Tinka...I have not stopped by in awhile and see depth and emotions that display the sadness of a shattered heart...a sad and yet strong work of poem...
I am sad without hubby who died Aug 17 08 and reading this write brings back all the hope and takes me into a world like this where I don't care even now and try but just don't care.
Hey Baby Girl! I can always FEEL your poetry! You, me, Sissy and Annie are The Trail Of Tears Warriors! We can validate each other, for we truly know and understand! LOVE YA! SC
this is what poetry is suppose to do--make the reader feel. I saw the solitary woman standing in the moonlight looking for comfort and finding none burning away to suffer another night of loneliness. I can only hope that it is the poet not the person who is feeling so sad.
You're all heart....with no deserving soul to share with...it stinks m8 ( not the poetry) the situation which at some point needs alterations. Hugs to yah Tinky
Ch'erie xxxx
The magical distance from sadness to joy is one step away. But, we must take that step ourselves. With gusto for life. Peace will follow in the shadow of he that walks in the light. JMW
Silence never make its footsteps to be heard and tears never mimic drops of rain, but the sadnes could be find in all of them if the heart found itself submerged in solitude.
Tinka as always your writing exposes the sadness in your heart and my own heart goes out to you. Hope this is not present day but if so know that you are never alone.
hugs
Fee
Tinka, I am so happy to see you back...even if your words are filled with sadness. You, dear Tinka, write from your heart, such beauty even in your sadness.
Tinka, I've been worried about you...meaning to write, which I will do in a moment. Your writing is sharp as always. No one can express the pain and sadness of one's sorrows better than you.
A striking painting. There are so many challenges in this life Sissy -I think the worst ones are the ones that test the heart. Hope all is well with you. Keep writing, no matter how hard it is.
Love big bro ...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2008
You do sad sader than sad
Love the art..
AD has been posting my art too small
Don't know the deal
With love and a SMooooooooooooooooooo000000000CH!
Ron
Beautifully writing and expressed thoughts your words captured your loneliness deep emotions and isolation
a lonely heart that cries in silent
Tinka it s great to see you posting again
I have been praying for you!!
And miss reading your thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning Star
Tinks you verse sad so dam well, I hope one day you realize life is awhole lot mental and the same way you verse sad you can verse happy and you might just psych some joy into your heart sweety pie, delicious. glad to see you writing anything. Love&hugs
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First rate art work and prose . . . the best!!
Hugs and love,
Lance
Dave.
You write them so well
I enjoy your creations of loneliness
Love & Peace be with you
William
nice work...
Art Sun...
Walt
this is what poetry is suppose to do--make the reader feel. I saw the solitary woman standing in the moonlight looking for comfort and finding none burning away to suffer another night of loneliness. I can only hope that it is the poet not the person who is feeling so sad.
Bobbi
Ch'erie xxxx
Regis
bill
Georg
hugs
Fee
All the best,
~ Sara
Love big bro ...
Love the art..
AD has been posting my art too small
Don't know the deal
With love and a SMooooooooooooooooooo000000000CH!
Ron
a lonely heart that cries in silent
Tinka it s great to see you posting again
I have been praying for you!!
And miss reading your thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning Star
Been wondering where you've been - worried about you - especially reading verse like this - you are in my prayers - keep writing -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.