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My First Haiku
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Mountain sky I eye
Wild flowers embracing me
City life unknown

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A friend sent me this picture the other day and I thought it made for a nice haiku.

If you are wondering about Sandi's review, I added another syllable to the second line. For some reason last night I thought *wild* was 2 syllables.

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 Reviews of "My First Haiku"
Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
I love it
since I love writing haiku
a dictionary makes a good friend
I often wonder about syllable count on certain words
Reviewed by Amy Hodge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
Lovely Stuff!!!! **Amy**
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 30, 2003
Absolutely lovely
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003

THIS was refreshing! Thank you, Teresa
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
perfection! :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Great photo and nice write.
But - to be honest: I have not the slightest idea what Haiku means or is? Can you let me know pls?
Nico
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
(((super girl)))

and i hope it's not your last...i miss the mountains *snif* used to live in salt lake city...surrounded by 'em

now i live on the flats of texas not a mountain in sight

beautiful haiku, beautiful pic just enhances it WELL DONE

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Short and sweet
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Mountain shag carpet
for scuffing my feet to feel
nature's static charge
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Wild is two syllables if you enunciate properly. Good haiku.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
I don't care to count the syllables, I just want to enjoy the beauty of what you have written.
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Good write!....even though the second line was short of one syllable....s/b 5/7/5 syllables.

Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful pic and poem.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Great haiku...write more....BHUWAN
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
a noble first attempt...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Perfect Sara!!

WoW!! What a beautiful picture!!

love
Tinka
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Perfect for those, like me, who have never seen a mountain.

Adam
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