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Snapshot
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Introduction

Yesterday, Saturday, February 26, 2005, I was on a poetry web-site, browsing. It is called The International Library of Poetry, and the company is physically located in Owings Mills, Maryland. They sponsor all kinds of poetry contests, and many years ago, a couple of my pieces were published in their anthologies. Way back then, I was less learned, or more naive' and did not realize that their operation, while quite impressive, is also probably the closest thing akin to a "Vanity Press."

The primary difference being, that instead of you paying to have your own book published, they ‘select' your poem, get your signed permission, include it in their hard-bound anthology, BUT - you will never actually SEE it, UNLESS you buy a copy of the book, which I did - ONCE! It is really a very smooth operation, and I would guess, a very profitable business. Anyway, they sponsor many contests, during each year, including both ‘Monthly' and "Daily' ones.

As I had not visited this site for a long time, perhaps a year or more, I spent a good time browsing. First, I submitted a poem for the monthly contest, after ‘massaging' and shortening it, in order to comply with their word and line restrictions. Next, I clicked on the daily contest, to see how it worked. Actually, it was a challenge and fun to do.

It is set up just like the little ‘magnets' of words, quite similar to those you place on your refrigerator, or maybe the file cabinet at work. I'm guessing that maybe a couple of hundred of these little ‘words' are squeezed onto this little board. You have to select ONLY TWENTY words or less, moving them down onto the larger field with your ‘mouse.' They are so crammed together, some on top of one another, two or three deep, that you need to ‘pull' some out of the way, just to see what is underneath. Then, you arrange, re-arrange, and place these words as you see fit, ultimately trying to create a new poem. There are no restrictions as to style, or format, so your mind can frequently change, especially as you ‘discover' a better choice, which was buried below before.

Thus, Dear Readers, the following little free verse was birthed. As I gingerly worked on moving those little words, to and fro, my "mind's eye" visualized a picture. As this visualization had no motion, like a movie, or video tape, and seemed to capture a brief moment in time, it was more like a frozen nanosecond, in time and space. As I kept counting and re-counting the number of words I had chosen, realized there were too many, then I had to carefully delete those making the total over twenty. CRAP!

As a writer, you know how difficult this is, right? You just created this absolutely wonderful, perfect little ‘piece' and someone says: "It's too long - shorten it!" OUCH! How that hurts! These creative ‘juices' are flowing now, and we don't want to "throw the baby out with the wash-water" do we? Nevertheless, RULES IS RULES! So, like a deft, careful surgeon, using a high-tech laser beam, or a scalpel even, we slowly and judiciously, and precariously - CARVE!

I'm guessing that this process took me a good forty-five minutes to an hour, to complete. Considering that I rarely do write ‘free verse' preferring to be a ‘rhymester' I'm naturally curious as to what others may think of it. Oh, I considered many other choices for the title: Captured, Frozen, Solitude, Lonely Flyer, and more, but after pondering for a modicum of time, I finally decided on the more generic title, "Snapshot." Please feel free to comment, and let me know what you think - OK? Can you SEE him? HER? I also highly recommend that you at least try the exercise yourself, who knows, you might even win a hundred bucks!



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SNAPSHOT

Copyright: February 26, 2005

Tom Hyland


The solitary silvered gull hangs tremulously
Amidst the sea's salt-air immensity -
A nameless amulet caught in lunar silence.


 
 


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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2005
ILP is a scam and so is Poetry .com and yet millions of people are so desperate to see their work in print they get suckered in. Sad story, but true. It certainly is NO credit to have them as a credit for your work. Hide it in the trash barrel and keep working.

You do good work.

Elizabeth



Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
I love this. It's like a super-charged haiku. Thank you for sharing this gem, Tom. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 2, 2005
I am with Andy here....Tom, you are a very good writer, so plz dont be fooled by them...I was fooled by them too...They are just bunches of crap....love this write my friend...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on February 28, 2005
Very creative. I've been to that sight before and spent time on the same game. Whether you win the prize or night, it gets your creative juices flowing just enough to move on.

M.Rose

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Nice job on the contest, Tom. I know about those books from experience, too. I have published in them but never bought one, though I will give them an "A" for effort in salesmanship.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
I liked the snapshot and thought about it from this angle a married couple in which anything you say is often used against you. Well I never bought the book but I have read a lot of poetry and I guess it is fine to be published but I had most of my poems already published in another book. But eeven if it is a vanity press are we not all vain in many ways. I admit to that much and if it gets your name out there every little bit helps.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Such a long, drawn out intro to your little--ggod, but little--poem. By the time I got through with the forplay I was almost too worn out for the real thing. Almost, but not quite, I did like your poem, but it would have stood on its on.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
i like this

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Snapshot is a great title for this because it gives a clear, quick snapshot picture of the bird, and the words you chose make it seem so small against the sky, yet so large in flight. Great work- and that poetry thing you mentioned, yeah, they have been scam artists since I was about 15, so I know what you mean:)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
If it is poetry . com.. They are a scam, scam, scam...



Never be published less you are paid for it..



A barrister, whom was ripped off by them, is taking them to task, me ole yanky doodle friend..


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