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Further South
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Talking, a lost art in the north...


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Further South…


 


Traveling, one finds many things,


Big balls of twine,


Rubber bands wrapped so fine,


Weather approaching a fine line,


Beaches clean, streets kept so fine,


Nothing like the place I come from, yes mine…


 


One also finds, in their travels, people


In the south, where they are the friendliest,


They will talk and talk, a never-ending barrage of conversation…


 


But move to the north, above the Mason Dixon line,


There you will most likely find,


Conversations so short, you would think you did smell,


Yes they do not, in the north, talk,


What they usually do it seems is walk,


Supposedly minding their own business,


And this is where I do balk…


 


I love to talk, to converse, to squawk,


Constantly you will find me, trying to strike up a conversation,


Even with a tree, my dog, or the leaves,


For trying to talk to anyone up north,


One has a better chance discussing the weather,


With an inanimate object, like a tree, see?


 


But for now, gotta live where I live,


I got Rufuz to talk with; he is not much on answering,


As he is kinda quiet and reserved,


So I live with that and strive to speak,


To as many living beings that have beaks,


Not, unfortunately, much of a treat…


        © ed – 3/17/04 


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 Reviews of "Further South"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Kool piece ...Ed
loved this one

William

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Talking to a tree isn't so bad. Just don't get to attached to it or you'll get splinters in a special place.

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Ed, could be true. Maybe it's the cold weather that causes it. Northerners can't get out as much. Staying inside so long makes them want to walk instead of talking.

Love and peace, Patty

Reviewed by Rene Swing (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
I loved your poem. You are so right too! Lets go South...Shall we?

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
HA HA HA! As a former New Yorker (of 27 years) who has lived in the South for 14 years (don't bother adding LOL) I can certainly attest to the aloofness of most Northerners.....and the warmth and chatty nature of Southerners....here's the funny part....you wouldn't believe how many people have transplanted from the North to the South in recent years...it's comical in proportion!! Perhaps more people are like you Ed, so keep chatting with Rufuz and the beaked friends, but y'all come down to Orlando anytime for a visit!

Great poem!!

~Rose~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
I talk to the wind, the trees, and my pets; all of them friendlier than many Northerners. One of my cats actually talks back!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Excellent! Very well written. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Now Ed, you jus' hush up with that kinda talk ya' hear? Just kidding. I love the sentiments you express in these verses, Ed. Love and peace to you and Rufuz. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Enjoyed this little gossip about the northerns...lol!!

Love Tinka!!

Reviewed on March 17, 2004
i love the south; always have! now i live in it, but i miss ohio! LOL (go figure!) oh, well....at least i have karla with me to keep me company! like your poem; thanks for sharing, ed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
"OH I wish I was in Dixie...Hurrah....Hurrah.."
Ok you got me singing here...nice one Ed...floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
I love the Southland! Enjoyed your poem. I try to stay south of that Mason Dixon line!


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