You Know you Got it Bad, When (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

You Know you Got it Bad, When
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Humor, philosophy, who the hell knows, I just try to write it so no one thinks it blows...

You Know you Got it Bad, When… OH man, you know got it bad when you can’t remember your own last write, Had to look for my name on the new poetry page, and that ain’t right, Someday maybe after I die I will then see the light, Okay, god let me go back and try it again to see if I can get it right… “This is your brain, this is your brain on drugs,” always liked that commercial, Or am I bringing up a conversation that is maybe way to controversial? Let me go back to the main subject, hell this is the main subject, How one forgets, when he has had too much, And has not the ability, ambition or to stretch the envelope, inertial, To continue on, with effigy of the self, not even sure that means anything, But, hell I am HIGH and writing off the ill effects of this buzz, Better this than to be nearby and to hear me way, way off key, sing…! Okay, what was the subject matter contained herein again? Probably as ever when I am buzzing along, to be mostly lame, But makes me feel good to express myself, no matter how I do sound insane, But don’t be upset, no one is at fault; I alone accept & shoulder herein the blame… Sorry if my miscellaneous ramblings do bore you silly, Oh heck, I have to make mention to you of my dear Aunt Lilly, Really I have no aunt by that name, but if I did I would want to mention her, It rhymed really good with silly so I felt I would be so and so on and so on, etc… AD Infinitum… © ed ~ poppywrittED ~ 7/15/04

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

I think you're being a little 'hard boiled" on yourself. Some days our brains go to lock down just to replenish. For me...it'a blonde mooment. Guess i could dye my hair but I'd still be the same person with "moments" like you have given us here. Thanks for sharing and making me understand that I'm not alone.
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Most interesting and unique write, Ed! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

I think you have had enough. LOL

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

You know you got it bad, when you can’t put down the pen!!!… I enjoyed this piece alot Ed!!!… Peace thru Having it When!!!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

You know you got it bad when........even the dog asks the question LOL, where is he BTW.

I thought mine lapped up the fish, coz i had four in the pond, then later I looked outside, and there they were, must of been hiding in the rocks..
NO Im not on anything. :)

~~~Ch'erie~~~

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

"You Know you Got it Bad, When" - You remember what is right - about "You Know you Got it Bad, When".

I read a unique and creativity's striking piece.

IT SEEMS THAT THE AUTHOR IS DRINKING NECTARS FROM HELICON.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 15, 2004

Oh never mind I get lost most of the time...one moment I am Fed-Up...and the next I am fed-right-Up...must be the age thing here because I don't do drugs or smoke...had 3 beers in the last 12 months...and had my daughter with me to keep me on my feet....lol!!

Thanks for your very kind review on my "Fed-Up" write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

What are you on Ed? don't give any to rufuz;-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Okay so what is my excuse? I don't smoke and yet when asked to recite my recent poem I could not remember the words.

Reviewed by Rene Swing (Reader)

Very interesting write.....I always have it bad.....lol.