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A loving fathers lament
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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A loving fathers lament… Oh come on dad its all the rage, No bra and a mini skirt, get on the right page, Geez daddy dear but sometimes you keep me in cage, But all the girls are doing it, after all this isn’t the stone age… Look at my boobs, how they hang out, aren’t they cute? All the boys will be turned on and wanting to give them a toot, No daddy I don’t want a reputation, well maybe just a little ill repute, I want to be popular, I want to go on dates, I don’t want to end up with Moms fate… Go to my room? But daddy I am an adult, all of fifteen, You always did say I was your special beauty queen, Daddy I am not doing anything obscene, I just want to be well known, and stop being alone, I’ll show you, just wait till I am eighteen… © ed ~ 1/15/05

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

Like Katy I can't get up off the floor
that pic is a hoot!
Ed you know how to shake things up;-)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Kids are something else for a minute there I thought you were peeping in my window because well never mind. They really do look oh well Papa Bear is looking.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Kids Eh? nice one Ed. Pic reminds me of some one who I once knew, her knee's were grazed too...

Paul.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Oh Shit!!

Where did you get my pic???

Check out my article page DAD!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Watch for the bill in the mail, Mr. M... I have a concussion from hitting the floor, laughing at that picture!

For someone who is the parent of a "boy", you really have the 'goods' on the girls, I'd say! Every line, every rhyme is (as the Irish say) spot on! What a marvelously inspired piece, and one nearly everyone can AHEM.. grab on to! hahahahahahaha (god, I get a kick outta myself) hehe... I love this ENTIRE page, Eddie, me sweet! katy xox.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Oh come on dad - its all the rage,

I wonder how many parents here that, every day, from one of their kids.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

yikes! makes me glad i am not a parent!! very cute! the pic is too funny; thanks for the giggle, my friend! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Ahh the life of a parent raising a teen daughter. Very cute write, Ed, if it just weren't so darned true.
Take care,
Sherry