I don’t know what I’m writing but it sure as hell ain’t poetry… (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 6, 2008

Hey, you're cool. Dare I ask, how do you fly high enough to see an aquamarine submarine and what is it doing in the sky? Strange UFO!

Sandy

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

You have something...you always rhyme your last words...I just wonder if you read the poems out loud if you would change anything...you know...how it sounds more than rhyming the last words...then again, I like your style it is very entertaining. It's all good...from the den's MR EDster...HUGS

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Ed, what ever you wrote you made me float, funny stuff man and the picture. I got a good laugh out of this right from the start

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

YOu write your mind...and it's good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

I like your poetry! An aquamarine submarine, hmmm. Better take Rufuz for that walk if he is sending email to PeeWee Ed's mutts. Don't worry about the rest. It will take care of itself.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Aquamarine submarine would have to be captained by a woman, out to make a statement.

Walt

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

You funny that's cause
RUFUZ CAN TEACH YOU IN DOGGIE LANGUE
woof woof bark ark woof snoof bark woof
FoRGET IT, rUFUZ SaID

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Sounds like you're really flyin, Bro! You best come down, and take Rufie for a walk; he really has to pee! (He sent my mutts an e-mail.)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

lill' brither, if you ain't a poet an' I believed yo'was...a SOB must had put som'tin' to confuse my brain on my morning cereal!!!!!!!!
brain?...should I had one?

Ed the Elder

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Enjoyed your beatles trip.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Aha,now you're in my territory!;-)
Don't be your own critic or you'll never write;-)
listen to the other poets,we like you!

luv,
et

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

We all live in a yellow submarine...aquamarine? Hmmmmm
That sub must be somewhere in the Gulf!
You're a funny man Ed!
love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Ed,

Writes 'em as you gets 'em. :) I'll read any and all, 'k? I like yellow submarines (thanks, now got the tune stuck in me head LOL). Have never seen an aquamarine one, bet that's cool!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Howdy to Rene and Rufuz, 'k?